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Band 5+: The bar chart below compares the percentages of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and three regions (Africa, Asia and Latin America) in 1950 and 2000, with projections for 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Image for topic: The bar chart below compares the percentages of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and three regions (Africa, Asia and Latin America) in 1950 and 2000, with projections for 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image provides a bar chart detailing percentages for the years 1950, 2000, and 2030 across four regions. For Whole World, the figures are 30% in 1950, approximately 48% in 2000, and about 59% in 2030. Africa's percentages are roughly 12% (1950), 39% (2000), and 51% (2030). Asia's values are approximately 14% for 1950, 39% for 2000, and 54% for 2030. In Latin America, the data shows approximately 42% in 1950, 69% in 2000, and 80% in 2030.

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The bar graph dipicts the percentage of human population staying in whole world and three regions in the year 1950,2000, and 2030.

Overall, human population was increased in all regions during three different time period. In Africa and Asia percentage growth were almost similar. While contrast, Latin America witness highest growth among rest of the areas.

In 1950, World population was 30% which was increased to just under 50% in the year 2000 and have an estimation to reach just under 60% till 2030. Africa and Asia witnessed similar growth trends over three differend years approximatily 10%,40%,50% respectively.

Latin Amarica recorded the highest figures among other countries, in 1950 population was just over 40% which rose to just under 70% in the year 2000 and projected to reach 80% by the year 2030.

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of the chart, including overall trends and comparisons between regions. It correctly identifies the general increase in urban population across all areas and highlights Latin America's highest figures. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions: the data for Africa and Asia are approximated as '10%,40%,50%' which is slightly off (should be around 12%,39%,51% and 14%,39%,54% respectively), and the report does not explicitly mention the projections for 2030 for Africa and Asia. Additionally, there are a few spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'dipicts', 'witness', 'Amarica'). To improve, ensure accurate data representation and proofread for language errors. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some sentences are difficult to follow. To improve, focus on creating smoother transitions between ideas and ensuring each paragraph has a clear central topic. Additionally, proofread to eliminate errors that hinder readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'dipicts' for 'shows', 'staying' for 'living'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'dipicts', 'Amarica', 'approximatily') and some word choices are imprecise (e.g., 'human population' instead of 'urban population'). To improve, expand your range of synonyms and ensure accurate spelling and word choice. Use more precise terms like 'urban population' and 'projected' instead of 'estimation'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('population was increased' should be 'population increased'), incorrect verb forms ('witness' should be 'witnessed'), and missing articles ('the whole world' instead of 'whole world'). Punctuation is also inconsistent (e.g., missing spaces after commas). To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread carefully for punctuation and article usage.

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