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Band 5+: The bar chart below compares the percentages of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and three regions (Africa, Asia and Latin America) in 1950 and 2000, with projections for 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Image for topic: The bar chart below compares the percentages of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and three regions (Africa, Asia and Latin America) in 1950 and 2000, with projections for 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image provides a bar chart detailing percentages for the years 1950, 2000, and 2030 across four regions. For Whole World, the figures are 30% in 1950, approximately 48% in 2000, and about 59% in 2030. Africa's percentages are roughly 12% (1950), 39% (2000), and 51% (2030). Asia's values are approximately 14% for 1950, 39% for 2000, and 54% for 2030. In Latin America, the data shows approximately 42% in 1950, 69% in 2000, and 80% in 2030.

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The bar chart illustrates the porpotion of residents living in urban areas in worldwide and Affica, Asia and Latin America from 1950 to 2000 and surveys for 2030.

Overall, the number of people living in 2030 exhibited the largest share in 4 countries while in 1950, population recorded the smallest percentage.

Africa’s population acounted for 10 %, one of third of whole world porpotion whereas in Latin America, the number of residents surprassed and dominated all categories with 50 percent in 1950. On the other hand, in 2000, all nations stood the second highest postion and Latin America remained the top ranked population with 70 %. In 2030, Latin America don’t have fluctuations and reached the largest point with higher its population than in 2000 by 10%. Following by the percentage of whole world was 60 percent, compared with Afica and Asia porpotion is approximetaly 50% and 55% respectively in the last year,

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latin: 4

america: 4

population: 4

porpotion: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the figures for Africa in 1950 and 2000 are not accurately reported, and the overall statement about '4 countries' is misleading. The report also lacks a clear structure and contains numerous spelling and grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, use precise language, and organize the information logically with clear overview and detailed paragraphs.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction and an overview, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'in 4 countries' is vague, and the comparison between regions is not clearly linked. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, such as 'Following by' which is incorrect. To improve, use a range of linking words and phrases (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'while') and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea. Also, avoid vague references and ensure that pronouns clearly refer to the intended nouns.

Lexical Resource

The report attempts to use a range of vocabulary, but there are several spelling errors and inappropriate word choices that affect clarity. For instance, 'porpotion' should be 'proportion', 'Affica' should be 'Africa', 'acounted' should be 'accounted', 'surprassed' should be 'surpassed', and 'postion' should be 'position'. Additionally, phrases like 'one of third' are incorrect; it should be 'one third'. To improve, focus on accurate spelling and precise vocabulary. Use synonyms for 'percentage' (e.g., 'proportion', 'share', 'figure') and ensure that terms like 'dominated' and 'fluctuations' are used correctly in context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. For example, 'the number of people living in 2030 exhibited the largest share' is awkward and should be rephrased. There are subject-verb agreement issues, such as 'Latin America don't have fluctuations' which should be 'doesn't have'. Also, the sentence 'Following by the percentage of whole world was 60 percent' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'This is followed by the whole world at 60 percent'. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for common errors. Use more complex structures like relative clauses and conditional sentences to demonstrate flexibility.

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