Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparision where relevant

The report attempts to address the task by describing the divorce rates in both countries over the given period, but it contains several inaccuracies and inconsistencies. The overall trend description is somewhat misleading: it states that Finland showed an upward trend, whereas the data indicates a general decline with fluctuations. Additionally, the figures cited for Sweden (e.g., 45%, 50%, 47%, 46%, 37%) do not match the provided data, and the report incorrectly states that Sweden peaked in 2012. The report also includes irrelevant or confusing phrases (e.g., 'outraced', 'intially', 'he divorce rate') and lacks clear comparisons between the two countries. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main trends and key figures, make direct comparisons where relevant, and ensure clarity and precision in language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. The overview is somewhat misleading as it states Finland showed an upward trend, but the data shows fluctuations with an overall slight decline. Cohesive devices are used but often incorrectly (e.g., 'Although... but', 'By the following years'). Paragraphing is present but not always effective. To improve, ensure the overview accurately reflects the main trends, use clear referencing, and avoid overusing transitional phrases.

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'outraced' instead of 'exceeded', 'intially' misspelled). There is some attempt to use a range of expressions (e.g., 'downward trend', 'fluctuations'), but the language is not always precise or natural. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure correct word forms and collocations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include missing commas, incorrect verb forms, and sentence fragments. The report attempts to use a range of structures but lacks control. To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of tenses. Proofreading for punctuation and article usage is also recommended.