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Band 6+: The bar chart below shows the number of new motorcycles sold by Harley Davidson and BMW between 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar graph with the title "Rain By Decade" on top and years labeled as 2021, 2018, 2016, 2014, 2012, 2010 on the right side. The vertical axis on the left side represents rainfall in cubic meters with numerical values starting from 0 and increasing by increments of 5000 up to 25000. Each year has a corresponding blue bar with varying lengths; 2021 has the longest bar reaching close to 25000, followed by 2018 with a bar slightly shorter than 20000, 2016 with a bar reaching to around 17500, 2014 with a bar slightly above 15000, 2012 with a bar just below 15000, and 2010 with the shortest bar at around 12500.
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This bar chart offers a comparison of the total amount of Harley Davidson and bmws sold. The chart studies their activities between 2010 till 2020. Overall Harley Davidson dominated the market but we can observe a turning point in this period of time.

In 2010 the Harley Davidson sales skyrocketed, they sold over 18000 products only in one year. Meanwhile bmws where extremely behind compared to its opponent. BMWs sold 100000 less then Harley Davidsons in 2010. Even thought we can see a slight dip in Harley’s numbers in the early 2010’s it was still far ahead of Mercedes.

The turning point happened in 2016, when bmws sales watched a major rise, the numbers sold between the two competitives became a lot closer with Harley Davidsons at 140000 and BMWs 115000. 2018 marks the overtaking by BMWs and ever since their numbers became more important compared to Harley’s.

In conclusion, Harley Davidsons peaked in the early 2010’s overshadowing BMWs. But that never stopped BMWs from dethroning them in the late 2010’s and becoming more efficient in the markets.

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Overall Band Score

6
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
harley: 6
davidson: 3
davidsons: 3
numbers: 3
2010's: 3
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Task Response

6
The report addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and some irrelevant information, likely due to misinterpreting the visual data. The response would benefit from improved accuracy in data reporting and a clearer focus on the key features of the chart. Also, the report contains information not present in the graph.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The report presents a general overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. The flow of information is somewhat disrupted by inaccuracies and a lack of specific details. Consider structuring the report with a clearer distinction between different periods and highlighting key trends more explicitly. Transitions between paragraphs could also be smoother to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

6
The vocabulary used is generally adequate, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some word choices are not entirely appropriate for academic writing. For instance, using more specific terms related to sales trends (e.g., 'increased,' 'decreased,' 'fluctuated') would enhance the report. Additionally, avoid informal language to maintain a professional tone. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and article usage. Sentence structure is relatively simple, and there's limited use of complex sentence constructions. Proofreading carefully and focusing on accurate grammar and sentence formation would significantly improve the report's quality.

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