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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of adults who exercised at least three times per week in four countries (Canada, Australia, UK, and Germany) in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The bar chart below shows the percentage of adults who exercised at least three times per week in four countries (Canada, Australia, UK, and Germany) in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Image for topic: The bar chart below shows the percentage of adults who exercised at least three times per week in four countries (Canada, Australia, UK, and Germany) in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The bar chart below shows the percentage of adults who exercised at least three times per week in four countries (Canada, Australia, UK, and Germany) in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart titled 'Percentage of Adults Exercising Regularly – 2010 & 2020.' The data for 2010 and 2020 respectively are as follows: Camany, 52% and 48%; Australia, 48% and 43%; UK, 48% and 43%; and Germany, 55% and 64%.

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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of young people who worked out not less than thrice per week in four nations in 2010 and 2020. Units are measured in percentage.

Overall, the number of adults who were trained regularly was decreased in Canada, Austrilia and UK but German shown the significant growth. Germans had the higher percentage who exercised day to day whereas Austrilia and UK shown the lowest.

Germany had recorded the higher percentage of 55 and 64 in both 2010 and 2020 respectively. In contrast of this both the Austrilians and British people had shown only 48 percentage in the 2010 and 43 percentage in 2020. Similayly Canadians people had 52 and 48 proportion which is slightly less than 2010 as compared to 2020.

Germans were trained more in comparision to other nations followed by canadians with only 3 percentage difference in 2010 and 16 percentage difference in 2020. UK and Austrilia share equal proportion of 48 and 43 in the years 2010 and 2020 respectively.

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percentage: 6

proportion: 3

people: 3

austrilia: 3

shown: 3

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The report addresses the task by presenting the main trends and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for Canada is incorrectly reported (52% and 48% are correct, but the description says 'slightly less than 2010 as compared to 2020' which is confusing). The report also misinterprets the data for Australia and the UK, stating they had 48% and 43% in both years, which is correct, but the phrasing is awkward. The report omits the fact that Germany had the highest percentage in both years, and the comparison between Germany and other countries is not clearly stated. Additionally, there are numerous spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'Austrilia', 'Similayly', 'comparision') that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurate data reporting, clearer comparisons, and proofreading for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The overview is present but could be clearer and more concise. Paragraphing is attempted but not consistently effective. To improve, use clear topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect (e.g., one for overall trends, one for specific comparisons).

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'proportion' for 'percentage', 'worked out' for 'exercised'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'Austrilia', 'Similayly', 'comparision') and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'trained regularly' instead of 'exercised regularly', 'day to day' instead of 'regularly'). To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary and ensure correct spelling and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('the number ... was decreased'), incorrect verb forms ('shown' instead of 'showed'), and awkward sentence structures. Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures accurately, and proofread to eliminate basic errors. For example, use passive voice correctly and ensure verb tenses are consistent.

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