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Band 6+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of students with part-time jobs in Australia in 1983 and 2003, and the table shows the average hours of part-time work and years to complete degree.Sunmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar graph and a table. The bar graph depicts percentages with age groups: for 17-19, approximately 45% for gray bars and 70% for black bars; for 20-24, around 55% gray, 80% black; for 25-29, about 50% gray, 70% black; for 30-39, near 40% gray, 50% black; for 40 plus, roughly 35% gray, 60% black. The table indicates average paid work per week and years to complete degree: in 1983, 5 hours and 3 years; in 2003, 14.4 hours and 4 years.

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The bar chart compares the percentage of students with part-time jobs in Australia in 1983 and 2003, while the tables shows the average hours of paid work per week and the average years needed to complete a degree.

overall, the percentage of students with part-time jobs increased in every age group. In addition, students worked longer hours and took more time to complete their degrees in 2003 than in 1983.

The highest percentage was recorded among student ages 2o-24, rising from about 50% in 1983 to nearly 70% in 2003. By contarst, the forty plus group hadthe lowest figures,incrising from around 30% to 40%. the percentage for the remaining age group also rose during the period.

According to the table, the average paid work per week incresed fromin 1983 to 14.4 hours in 2003. Similarly, the average years required to complee a degree rose from three years to four years.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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percentage: 4

average: 4

years: 4

students: 3

hours: 3

group: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the main features of both the bar chart and the table, and makes relevant comparisons. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions in the data (e.g., 'about 50%' for 20-24 in 1983 should be around 55%, and 'nearly 70%' should be around 80%). Additionally, there are a few spelling errors (e.g., 'contarst', 'incrising', 'complee', 'incresed fromin') and a typo ('2o-24'). To improve, ensure data accuracy and proofread for spelling and grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized, with a clear overall statement and a logical progression from the bar chart to the table. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the missing capitalization at the start of the second paragraph and the use of 'the tables shows' which slightly disrupts flow. Paragraphing is adequate but could be more skillfully managed to separate key features more distinctly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some appropriate terms like 'recorded among' and 'rising from'. However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'contarst', 'incrising', 'incresed', 'complee') and a typo ('2o-24') that detract from lexical precision. The range is limited, and more sophisticated vocabulary could be used to describe trends and comparisons more naturally. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreement ('tables shows'), missing articles ('the forty plus group hadthe lowest figures'), and incorrect prepositions ('fromin 1983'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but the errors reduce overall accuracy and control.

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