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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar graph displaying the contribution percentage of Agriculture, Industry, and Services to India's GDP from 1960 to 2000 in increments of 10 years, with agriculture decreasing from 60% to 30%, industry fluctuating between 10-30%, and services increasing from under 40% to just over 50%.

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the bar graph illustrates the relative percentage contributions made by agriculture, service and industrial sectors to the India economy over the forty-years perod between 1960 and 2000.

Overall, the significance of agriculture declined steadily while services were significant increase decade by decade. A differen pattern emerged for industry, which was slight fluctuation but then remained from 1980 onwards.

In 1960, agriculture contribution stood above 60%. After a decade it plunged to 55%. In 1980 agriculture started to decrease gradually and fell to 10%. Then, the agriculture contribution was a significant drop at 30% by 1990. Finally, in 2000 it hit a low of 15%.

While agriculture fell over the period, service contribution rose gradually over the period. In 1960 service stood at below 20%. Then, it increased steadily over two decades. In 1990, it reached 45% and at the end of the period service peaked at over 60% by 2000.

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agriculture: 6

service: 4

decade: 3

contribution: 3

period: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and identifies the general trends for each sector. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and consistency. For example, the report states agriculture fell to 10% in 1980 and 15% in 2000, which contradicts the visual description and the previous sentence in the same paragraph. Additionally, the description of the industry sector is vague and lacks specific data points. To improve, ensure that all reported figures are consistent throughout the text and include specific data for all categories mentioned to provide a more complete comparison.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is occasionally hindered by awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. To improve, ensure that transitions between sentences are smoother and that the relationship between different trends is more clearly articulated. Using more sophisticated cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Conversely,' or 'Regarding...') would help the reader follow the comparison between sectors more easily.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat repetitive and contains several inaccuracies in word choice (e.g., 'services were significant increase' instead of 'services saw a significant increase'). There are also spelling errors such as 'perod' and 'differen'. To reach a higher band, aim for a wider range of academic vocabulary to describe trends (e.g., 'experienced a downward trend,' 'witnessed a surge,' or 'stabilized') and ensure that word forms (noun vs. verb vs. adjective) are used correctly.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and sometimes impede the clarity of the message. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence structure (e.g., 'which was slight fluctuation but then remained'). Many sentences are simple or contain errors in how they connect clauses. Focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that verb tenses are used accurately when describing historical data. Pay close attention to the use of articles and prepositions to improve overall precision.

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