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Band 4+: The bar chart details information about the proportion of households with various items—a telephone, microwave, CD player, mobile phone, home computer, clothes dryer, internet, and dishwasher—between 2001 and 2008.

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The image presents a bar chart depicting the percentage of British households with specific items in 2001 and 2008. In 2001, telephone ownership was at approximately 90%, microwave 82%, CD player 60%, mobile phone 34%, home computer 50%, clothes dryer 44%, internet 9%, and dishwasher 18%. By 2008, telephone ownership slightly decreased to around 86%, microwave increased to 90%, CD player remained roughly the same at 60%, mobile phone rose significantly to 85%, home computer ownership surged to 75%, clothes dryer grew to 54%, internet sharply increased to 50%, and dishwasher ownership rose to 46%.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of various items were had in British household in 2001 and 2008.

Overall, it is cleared that all seven items experienced growth in the number of bristish household while the telephone consistently had the decrease proportion.

In 2001, the percentage of households with telephone item stood at 95%, which higher figures than microwave and CD player at 80% and 70% respectively but it was dropped slightly at 90% while those two items dramatically jumped at 90% which remained the same as telephone item in 2008. In 2001, the smallest amount was internet which had only 10% compared to dishwasher had 20%, mobile phone held at 25%, home computer retained at 35% and clothes dryer owned 60% respectively however internet increased significantly at 60%, dishwasher rose at 40%, mobile phone jumped to 80%, home computer went up to 65% and the last items-clothes dryer rose slightly to 70% in the same order in 2008.

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The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with clarity. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the chart and ensure that comparisons and trends are clearly articulated. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to enhance clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report suffers from significant issues in coherence and cohesion. The organization of information is unclear, and the progression of ideas is difficult to follow. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the connections between sentences and ideas are often weak. To improve, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each address a specific aspect of the data, and a concise conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

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The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies in word choice. There is some repetition of words and phrases, and the language used is not always appropriate for the task. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider variety of vocabulary related to describing trends and proportions. Focus on using synonyms and paraphrasing to avoid repetition, and ensure that the language used is accurate and appropriate for an academic report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. These errors significantly affect the clarity and accuracy of the report. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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