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Band 5+: The bar chart illustrates data on the percentage of British adults of different age brackets using the Internet daily during two time periods: 2003 and 2006.

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The image presents a bar chart displaying the percentage of adults by age group using the Internet from 2003 to 2006 in the UK. For the 16-24 age group, the percentages were 80% in 2003, 90% in 2004, 85% in 2005, and 85% in 2006. The 25-44 age group showed 70% in 2003, 75% in 2004, 75% in 2005, and 80% in 2006. The 45-54 age group had 60% in 2003, 65% in 2004, 60% in 2005, and 65% in 2006. The 55-64 age group percentages were 40% in 2003, 45% in 2004, 40% in 2005, and 45% in 2006. Lastly, the 65+ age group had 20% in 2003, 25% in 2004, 25% in 2005, and 30% in 2006.

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The bar graph presents data about matured people who usually utilized the Internet in 4 year periods between 2003 and 2006.

Overall, the percentage of all age groups rose after 3 years. However, using of the Internet experienced a downward trend from the youngest group to the oldest category. It is also worth mentioning that, 65+ aged people’s rate began at the year 2004 while the others started at 2003.

The increase of 25-44 and 45-54 age group was more significant than the youngest people. In 2 year the group 16-24 remained unchanged at 80% the year 2003-2004. Despite consistency of this group, at these years 25-44 year old people accounted for about 50% while after that this percentage rose by 15%. Nevertheless, the youngers peaked at 100%, with difference is 20%. There was decreasing in the year 2006 by approximately 10%, whereas the second group climbed until this year and reached the peak of exactly 80%. Likewise, 45-54 mirrored the same trend at these years.

The two last categories of age showed very small rise. The 55-64 age’s group started at almost 30%, a figure that then increase slightly till 2005. After that, it showed the highest point in this group and reached at 50%. Last but not least, the last age people’s level had change only by 3% from about 17% to 20%.

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group: 7

about: 3

people: 3

after: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for the 16-24 age group is incorrectly described (e.g., 'remained unchanged at 80% the year 2003-2004' and 'peaked at 100%'), and the figures for other groups are often imprecise or wrong (e.g., 25-44 'about 50%' and 'rose by 15%', 55-64 'started at almost 30%' and 'reached at 50%', 65+ 'change only by 3% from about 17% to 20%'). The statement that the 65+ group started at 2004 is incorrect. The report also omits specific data for some years. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and avoid vague or incorrect figures. Focus on clearly describing trends and comparisons with correct numbers.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is often disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, phrases like 'In 2 year the group 16-24 remained unchanged' and 'the youngers peaked at 100%' are confusing. The use of cohesive devices is inconsistent, and some sentences are not clearly linked. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use a range of linking words and referencing (e.g., 'this group', 'the former', 'the latter') to guide the reader smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. There are attempts to use synonyms (e.g., 'matured people', 'utilized', 'downward trend'), but some choices are inappropriate or informal (e.g., 'youngers', 'last but not least'). The report lacks the sophisticated lexical control expected for a high band score. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'adults', 'experienced a rise', 'fluctuated', 'the most elderly group') and avoid informal or invented terms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. Examples include 'the percentage of all age groups rose after 3 years' (should be 'over the three-year period'), 'using of the Internet' (should be 'Internet usage'), and 'the youngers peaked at 100%' (incorrect comparative). Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and sentence structure. Reviewing grammar rules and proofreading can help reduce errors.

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