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Band 5+: The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people using different modes of transportation to commute to work in one European city in 2010 and 2020.

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The image shows a bar chart detailing the percentage of people using different modes of transport to work in a European city for the years 2010 and 2020. In 2010, Car usage was at 37%, Bicycle at 8%, Public Transport at 22%, and Walking at 15%. In 2020, the figures were 28% for Car, 16% for Bicycle, 25% for Public Transport, and 21% for Walking.

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The data below shows the amaont of people that use diffrent methods of transportation to go to work

Overall , The amuont of people that transport buy cars dicreased and bicycles doubled , But on the other hand Public Transport and walking changed a little bit .

The cars and bicycles witnest a huge change in there percentages , For an example bicycles doubuled from 2010 to 2020 whiles the cars droped from just below 40 percent to just under 30 percent , dispite the huge drop in the car persentage it still remaind the most used transport whiles the bikes remained the lowest among them .

On the other side walking and public transport increased in both years , Witch walking went from 15 percent to 21 percent whiles public transport went from 22 to 25 percent .

Dispiet the diffrencese but the cars remained the number one transportion methored

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walking: 3

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The report addresses the task, but there are noticeable areas for improvement. The organization is somewhat clear, but could benefit from a more structured approach, such as grouping the modes of transport more logically (e.g., private vs. public). The language contains inaccuracies and awkward phrasing, which affect clarity. To improve, focus on using more precise vocabulary related to trends and data comparison, and ensure grammatical accuracy throughout the report. Also, aim for a more sophisticated introduction and conclusion that provide a clearer overview and summary of the data.

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The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, affecting the overall coherence. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly. For example, using phrases like 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' or 'Furthermore' can help to connect related points and improve the logical progression of your report. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

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The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains inaccuracies ('amuont,' 'buy,' 'dicreased,' 'witnest,' 'droped,' 'persentage,' 'whiles,' 'Witch,' 'diffrencese,' 'transportion methored'). Expanding your range of vocabulary and ensuring correct spelling and usage would significantly improve this aspect. Try to incorporate synonyms and more precise terms to describe the trends and data presented. For example, instead of 'huge change,' you could use 'significant increase' or 'substantial decrease.'

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The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect word forms, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. Sentence structures are relatively simple, which limits the demonstration of grammatical range. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences, passive voice where appropriate) and carefully proofread your work to correct grammatical errors. Pay attention to verb tenses, article usage, and correct spelling.

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