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Band 4+: The bar chart show the percentage of drug company's total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.

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The image shows a bar chart with the percentage of a drug company's total sales by region from 2002 to 2006. In 2002: America 41%, Europe 34%, Asia 25%. In 2003: America 35%, Europe 35%, Asia 30%. In 2004: America 27%, Europe 38%, Asia 35%. In 2005: America 29%, Europe 34%, Asia 37%. In 2006: America 30%, Europe 30%, Asia 40%.

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The digram illsturate who all America, Europe and Asia consumption for treatments from druge company,s to peroid from 2002 to 2006.

Overall, from the chart, show that Asia consumption for drugs was very low, while al America and Europe were high consumption.but in the end of period the percentage of seles aproximatly duoblacated.

Throgh chart illsturate that percentage of company,s seles in America reaching 41% , while the percentage of seles in Asia was 25% throgh 2002, the percentage for Europe was moderate, it arrived to 34% throgh same year. This percentage do not constant throghout all study years, the percentage of seles after 2002 begain decreases, while reaching 35% in 2003, 27% in 2004, this decrising in seles maybme because peopls awareness to risk some of drugs consumption. but recorded slightly increase in size of seles in end of the period, exactly in 2005 and 2006, consecutivly. in contrast, the percentage of seles in Euorpe changed in slightly form, its ranged between 30% in 2006 to 38% in 2004.

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percentage: 7

seles: 7

america: 3

europe: 3

consumption: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the main trends and some specific data, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the statement that Asia's sales were 'very low' is not accurate, as Asia's percentage increased to 40% by 2006, surpassing both America and Europe. Additionally, the report omits the data for Asia in 2003, 2004, and 2005, and it does not provide a clear comparison of all regions across the entire period. The inclusion of a speculative reason for the decrease in America's sales ('because people's awareness to risk some of drugs consumption') is inappropriate for a task that requires describing data, not explaining causes. The report also has numerous spelling and grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main trends, comparing the regions, and including key data points for all years, while avoiding unsupported explanations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information by region and time, but the flow is often disrupted by unclear references and abrupt transitions. The overall trend is mentioned, but the progression of ideas is not always logical, and paragraphing is not effectively managed. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea, such as one region or a specific time period. Additionally, use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'over the period') to link sentences and paragraphs smoothly, making the report easier to follow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with limited range and flexibility. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'digram', 'illsturate', 'druge', 'peroid', 'aproximatly', 'duoblacated', 'Throgh', 'seles', 'begain', 'decrising', 'maybme', 'peopls', 'consecutivly', 'Euorpe', 'form') and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'consumption for treatments' instead of 'sales', 'arrived to' instead of 'reached'). To improve, expand your vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'accounted for', 'comprised', 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'declined', 'rose steadily') and practice using precise terms. Also, ensure correct spelling and word forms to enhance clarity and professionalism.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that significantly hinder understanding. There are problems with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'The digram illsturate', 'This percentage do not constant'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'show that Asia consumption for drugs was very low' should be 'shows that Asia's consumption of drugs was very low'), and missing or incorrect articles and prepositions. Sentence structures are often incomplete or run-on, and punctuation is frequently missing (e.g., missing commas and periods). To improve, focus on writing clear, complete sentences with correct subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. Review basic grammar rules for articles, prepositions, and punctuation. Practice using a variety of sentence structures, such as complex sentences with subordinate clauses, to demonstrate greater grammatical range.

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