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Band 6+: The bar chart showed the percentage of school children learning to play four different musical instruments (violin, guitar, piano, drums) in 3 years 2005, 2010, 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a bar graph showing data for four categories (GUITAR, PIANO, DRUM, VIOLIN) across three different years (2005, 2010, 2015). For 2005, GUITAR is at 5, PIANO at 10, DRUM at 7, VIOLIN at 8. For 2010, GUITAR is at 10, PIANO at 20, DRUM at 15, VIOLIN at 9. For 2015, GUITAR is at 25, PIANO at 30, DRUM at 20, VIOLIN at 5. The y-axis measures from 0 to 30 with intervals of 5, and the x-axis lists the years and categories mentioned.

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The bar chart show the percentage of school children who learning four musical instrument (guitar, piano, drum and violin) in 2005, 2010 and 2015.

Overall, guitar and piano was the most popular instrument in all years, and their number increase a lot. While drum and violin was less popular and only change a little.

In 2005, about 11% of childrens learn guitar, which is a little higher than piano at 10%. Violin have around 8%, and drum was the lowest with about 6%. In 2010, guitar rise quickly to 20%, and piano also go up to around 17%. However, drum and violin only increase slightly to about 7% and 9%.

By 2015, guitar reach the highest number at about 27%, and piano follow with 25%. Drum increase slowly to around 8%, but violin drop a bit to about 7%, making it the least popular.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

piano: 5

about: 5

guitar: 4

violin: 4

popular: 3

increase: 3

around: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and provides relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, and the language could be more precise. For improvement, ensure data accuracy by double-checking the values on the chart and use a wider range of vocabulary to describe the trends. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a generally clear overview of the data, with a discernible progression of ideas. However, the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider structuring the report with a clearer distinction between overall trends and specific year-by-year comparisons. Transition words could be used more effectively to link ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for describing the data, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Instead of repeatedly using phrases like 'increase a lot' or 'change a little,' try incorporating more specific and descriptive language to convey the magnitude of the changes. For instance, use 'significant growth,' 'moderate increase,' or 'remained relatively stable.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'guitar and piano was') and incorrect verb tenses ('childrens learn') are present. Sentence structure could also be improved for better flow and accuracy. Review basic grammar rules and sentence construction to enhance the overall quality of your writing.

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