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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the average amount of water used for six different household activities in a country in 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a vertical bar chart titled "Average daily water consumption by household activity", with a vertical axis labeled in increments of 25 from 0 to 100, and a horizontal axis listing six household activities, comparing data between 2000 and 2020. For Bathing, consumption is approximately 86 in 2000 and 63 in 2020. For Toilet use, values are approximately 45 in 2000 and 38 in 2020. For Laundry, consumption stands at approximately 32 in 2000 and 41 in 2020. For Dishwashing, values are approximately 28 in 2000 and 24 in 2020. For Cooking, consumption measures approximately 12 in 2000 and 15 in 2020. For Garden watering, values are 50 in 2000 and approximately 73 in 2020.

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The bar chart illustrates the distribution of water consumption in six daily chores in 2000 and 2020 in a country . The water measured in Litres .

Generally speaking , the mount of water used in all the household activities are close with notabe exception of bathing , wich was more high in 2000 than 2020 . In the contrary the garden watering consumed more water in 2020 then 2000

Looking specifcally to the the 2000 the water consumption was in the highest value in bathing with 85 litres and then in garden watering with 50 Litres. In contract the lowest volume is 12 Litres used on cooking .

Regarding the year 2020 , the hight volume consumption is 72 Litres wich is used in the garden irrigation then the bathing with 62 Litres consumed daily . like the year 2000 the lowest voume is used in cooking with 15 Litres .

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

litres: 7

water: 5

consumption: 3

bathing: 3

garden: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main features of the chart and making some comparisons between the two years. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the report states that 'the amount of water used in all the household activities are close,' which is not accurate as there is a wide range from 12 to 86. It also omits data for toilet, laundry, and dishwashing, and the comparison for these activities is missing. Additionally, there are numerous spelling and grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, ensure all key data points are reported, make more precise comparisons, and proofread for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for each year. However, the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which make the message harder to follow. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'In the contrary', 'In contract'). To improve, use clearer linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea. Also, avoid informal or incorrect transitions and ensure the report is well-paragraphed with a clear separation of overview and details.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but limited in range and precision. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'mount' for 'amount', 'notabe' for 'notable', 'wich' for 'which', 'hight' for 'high', 'voume' for 'volume') and some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'close' instead of 'similar', 'more high' instead of 'higher'). To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'consumption', 'usage', 'approximately', 'significantly'). Ensure correct spelling and word forms to enhance lexical accuracy. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('the mount of water used... are close'), incorrect comparative forms ('more high'), and misuse of articles and prepositions. There are also punctuation issues, such as missing commas and incorrect spacing. The range of sentence structures is limited, and many sentences are short and repetitive. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice) and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb tenses. Proofread to eliminate basic errors and improve overall accuracy.

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