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Band 4+: The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and projected distribution in 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Bar Chart)

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The image contains three bar graphs for Country A, Country B, and Country C depicting the percentage distribution of Agriculture, Industry, and Services in 1980 and 2020. For Country A in 1980, Agriculture approximately 20%, Industry 50%, Services 30%; in 2020, Agriculture approximately 40%, Industry, 30%, Services 30%. For Country B in 1980, Agriculture approximately 10%, Industry 55%, Services 35%; in 2020, Agriculture approximately 20%, Industry 35%, Services 45%. For Country C in 1980, Agriculture approximately 60%, Industry 25%, Services 15%; in 2020, Agriculture approximately 20%, Industry 30%, Services 50%.

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The bar chart compares three countries and show information about three works over the 40 years, between 1980 and 2020.

Overall, the country A and the country C show steady increasing over the period while country B shows fractions between the years.

In 1980, the agriculture showed the highest percentage in country B by 55%. While, in country C, it was on the lowest percentage by almost 0.5%. In country A, the agriculture highlighted 20% at the start of the period but ended by almost 10% in 2020. The agriculture in Country B showed downward trend by near to 48%. And the agriculture, had the lowest percentage at the beginning of the period, in country C ended by almost 0.1%.

The industry had taken the highest percentage by 30% in country A, in 1980 before decreasing to almost 28% in 2020. The industry showed lowest percentage in country B by 20% in 1980. The services were always higher than 25% in 1980. And, in 2020, country C showed the highest growth with almost 80%. While country B had the lowest percent.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

country: 12

percentage: 5

almost: 5

agriculture: 4

showed: 4

lowest: 4

period: 3

while: 3

highest: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but struggles significantly with data accuracy and clarity. There are major contradictions between the reported figures and the provided visual description (for example, stating agriculture was 55% in Country B when the description says 10%, or claiming services in Country C reached 80% when the description says 50%). Additionally, the overview is vague and does not clearly summarize the main trends. To improve, focus on accurately extracting data from the charts and ensuring that the comparisons made between countries and sectors are logically structured and mathematically consistent with the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat disjointed, making it difficult for the reader to follow the comparisons between countries and sectors. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some sentences are fragmented (e.g., starting sentences with 'While'). To improve, try to group information logically - for example, one paragraph for the 1980 data and another for the 2020 projections, or one paragraph per country. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite limited and often inaccurate in context. For example, using 'three works' to describe employment sectors is incorrect, and 'show fractions' does not clearly convey the intended meaning regarding trends. There is also repetitive use of basic words. Aim to use more precise academic vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'surged', 'declined') and employment (e.g., 'sectors', 'industries', 'workforce'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors that impact the clarity of the report. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the chart... show'), incorrect article usage (e.g., 'the country A'), and awkward sentence structures. Many sentences are poorly constructed, which forces the reader to re-read them to understand the meaning. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures and ensuring that your tense usage is consistent, especially when distinguishing between past data (1980) and projections (2020).

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