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Band 7+: The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar chart comparing divorce rates in Finland and Sweden from 2011 to 2015. Finland's rates by year: 2011 - 40%, 2012 - 30%, 2013 - 39%, 2014 - 35%, 2015 - 33%. Sweden's rates by year: 2011 - 45%, 2012 - 43%, 2013 - 48%, 2014 - 44%, 2015 - 37%.

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The bar chart provides information about the percentages of divorces in Finland and Sweden between 2011 and 2015.

Overall, Sweden experienced a downward trend, while Finland showed an upward trend throughout the period. Both countries’ rates witnessed some fluctuations. Although Finland initially had a lower divorce rate, it overtook Sweden by the end of the period.

The divorce rate in Sweden was around 45% in 2011, being higher than Finland’s rate by approximately 8%. Then, it sharply increased to about 50% in 2012, and the figure showed a decline during the next three years. It decreased by almost 3% in 2013 and continued to decrease gradually to around 45% in 2014, hitting a low point of about 37% in 2015.

The percentage of divorces in Finland was less than 40% in 2011, and it declined to about 33% in 2012. Then, the percentage experienced an increase in the next two years, but Finland’s divorce rate remained lower than Sweden’s rate until 2014. Finland’s percentage rose to approximately 39% in 2013 and increased by around 3% in 2014. It remained the same for the next year, outracing the rate of Sweden.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sweden: 5

about: 4

finland: 4

divorce: 3

around: 3

finland's: 3

percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and detailed comparisons between the two countries. The overall trends are correctly identified, and the data is presented in a logical structure. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Sweden's rate in 2012 is described as increasing to about 50%, but the actual figure is 43%; Finland's rate in 2015 is said to remain the same, but it actually decreased to 33%). Additionally, the statement that Finland overtook Sweden by the end of the period is incorrect, as Sweden's rate remained higher. To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately reported and that the overview reflects the true final positions. Minor omissions, such as not mentioning the exact figures for all years, are acceptable, but key comparisons should be precise.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear overall structure: introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs. The information is presented logically, and the use of cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'Then', 'Although') helps the reader follow the narrative. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the phrase 'outracing the rate of Sweden' which is slightly awkward and could be more smoothly integrated. Additionally, the final sentence could be rephrased for better flow. Overall, the message is easy to follow, and paragraphing is managed well.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, including terms like 'downward trend', 'upward trend', 'fluctuations', 'sharply increased', 'decline', 'gradually', and 'hitting a low point'. There is some flexibility in word choice, but there are a few inaccuracies and less natural expressions, such as 'outracing the rate of Sweden' and 'remained the same for the next year' (which could be more precise). The use of synonyms for 'rate' and 'percentage' is adequate, but more sophisticated and precise vocabulary could enhance the report. Overall, the lexical resource is good but not fully flexible or natural throughout. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a wide range of grammatical structures with good control. There are complex sentences, appropriate use of comparatives, and accurate punctuation. The grammar is largely error-free, and the report is easy to read. However, there are a few minor issues, such as the phrase 'outracing the rate of Sweden' which is grammatically awkward, and the sentence 'It remained the same for the next year' could be more precise. These are minor and do not detract significantly from the overall clarity. The report demonstrates strong grammatical competence, but not quite full flexibility and control.

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