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Band 8+: The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar chart comparing divorce rates in Finland and Sweden from 2011 to 2015. Finland's rates by year: 2011 - 40%, 2012 - 30%, 2013 - 39%, 2014 - 35%, 2015 - 33%. Sweden's rates by year: 2011 - 45%, 2012 - 43%, 2013 - 48%, 2014 - 44%, 2015 - 37%.

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The bar chart provides information about the percentages of divorces in Finland and Sweden between 2011 and 2015.

Overall, Sweden experienced a downward trend, while Finland showed an upward trend throughout the period. Both countries’ rates witnessed some fluctuations. Although Finland initially had a lower divorce rate, it overtook Sweden by the end of the end of the period.

The divorce rate in Sweden was around 45% in 2011, being higher than Finland’s rate by approximately 8%. Then, it sharply increased to about 50% in 2012, and the figure showed a decline during the next three years. It decreased by almost 3% in 2013 and continued to decrease gradually to around 45% in 2014, hitting a low point of about 37% in 2015.

The percentage of divorces in Finland was less than 40% in 2011, and it declined to about 33% in 2012. Then, the percentage experienced an increase in the next two years, but Finland’s divorce rate remained lower than Sweden’s rate untill 2014. Finland’s percentage rose to approximately 39% in 2013 and increased by around 3% in 2014. It remained same for the next year, outracing the rate of Sweden.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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sweden: 5

about: 4

finland: 4

divorce: 3

around: 3

finland's: 3

percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and detailed comparisons between the two countries. The overall trend is correctly identified, and the data is presented in a structured manner. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Sweden's rate in 2012 is described as increasing to 50%, but the actual figure is 43%; Finland's rate in 2015 is said to remain the same, but it actually decreased to 33%). Additionally, the phrase 'by the end of the end of the period' contains a typo, and 'untill' should be 'until'. To improve, ensure data accuracy and proofread for minor errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear overall structure: introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs for each country. The use of cohesive devices is generally effective, and the progression of ideas is logical. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the phrase 'the end of the end of the period' which disrupts flow, and the final sentence could be more clearly linked to the preceding information. Overall, the message is easy to follow, and paragraphing is managed well.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, including terms like 'downward trend', 'upward trend', 'fluctuations', 'overtook', 'sharply increased', 'decline', 'gradually', 'hitting a low point', and 'outracing'. These are used accurately and contribute to a natural and sophisticated tone. There is minor repetition (e.g., 'percentage' used multiple times), but this does not detract significantly. Overall, the lexical resource is strong and flexible. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a wide range of grammatical structures with good control. Sentences are varied in length and complexity, and punctuation is generally correct. There are a few minor errors, such as 'untill' (spelling) and 'remained same' (missing article), but these are infrequent and do not impede understanding. The grammar is accurate overall, and the report demonstrates a high level of proficiency.

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