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Band 7+: The bar chart shows the percentage of adults who were overweight or obese (too fat or too much fat) in one country from 1965 to 2015. The pie chart shows the proportion of adults who were overweight, obese or severely obese in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart and a pie chart. The bar chart indicates the percentage of adults overweight or obese from 1965 to 2015, showing values as follows: 1965: 50%, 1975: 52%, 1985: 56%, 1995: 64%, 2005: 70%, 2015: 70%. The pie chart details the weight range of the adult population in 2015, segmented into: Healthy or underweight 6%, Overweight 29%, Obese (too fat) 31%, Severely obese (dangerously fat) 34%.

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The bar chart demonstrates the percentage of overweight or obese adults between 1965 and 2015, while the pie chart illustrates the distribution of four weight levels among the adult population in 2015.

Overall, the prevalence of overweight and obesity among adults increased steadily over the period. Furthermore, the distribution was dominated by overweight and obese groups, only a minority was severely obese in 2015.

In 1965, roughly 45% of the adult population were classified as obese or overweight. This figure remained relatively stable for the following two decades. After that, there was a significant growth in 1995, when nearly 60% was found to be obese or overweight. It then rose gradually until the end of the observed time, reaching a peak of approximately 75% in 2015.

Turning the pie chart, obese individuals accounted for 34% of the adult population, representing the largest proportion among all weight categories. It was followed by overweight group, making up over one-third of the distribution. Besides, 29% of the adult population was categorized as healthy or underweight, which was only 2% lower than that for the overweight group. Notably, only 6% were identified as severely obese in 2015.

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obese: 7

adult: 4

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, providing a reasonable summary of the information presented in both charts. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, and the structure could be improved for clarity. To improve, ensure data accuracy by double-checking figures from the charts. Also, consider structuring the report with a clearer distinction between the description of the bar chart and the pie chart, possibly dedicating separate paragraphs to each after the overview.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented in a logical order, with a clear introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs for each chart. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are mostly smooth, contributing to the overall coherence. However, there's room for improvement in using more varied cohesive devices to further enhance the flow and connection between ideas. For example, consider using more synonyms or paraphrasing to avoid repetition and strengthen the links between different parts of the report.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary relevant to the topic of weight and obesity. Terms like 'prevalence,' 'distribution,' 'classified,' and 'categorized' are used appropriately. However, there are instances where the language could be more precise or varied. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'overweight or obese,' consider using synonyms or more specific terms where appropriate. Expanding the range of vocabulary and using more nuanced language could further enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures used effectively. There are only a few minor errors. However, attention to detail in proofreading could help eliminate these errors and further improve the report's overall quality. Also, ensure correct subject-verb agreement and consistent tense usage throughout the report.

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