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Band 7+: The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a bar graph depicting the percentage of Canadian workforce in five industries, comparing the years 1850 and 2020. The manufacturing industry had 36% in 1850, and 9% in 2020. The services industry increased from 33% to 81%. Agriculture/fishing decreased from 22% to 1%. Construction increased from 1% to 5%. Energy/Water had 8% in 1850 and 3% in 2020.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the Canadian labour force in the 5 largest industries, comparing the years 1850 and 2020.

Overall, we can clearly see that a large number of people moved to the services industry, making it the highest proportion of employment in 2020. In contrast, Manufacturing and Agriculture/Fishing experienced a dramatic drop. Moreover, the Construction and Energy/Water domains remained relatively the same.

In 1850, the Manufacturing and Services sectors were the most important industries which had a similar level of workers, just over 30%. Agriculture/Fishing also contributed nearly a quarter of hiring, whereas Construction and Energy/Water occupied a significant portion of 8%.

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