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Band 5+: The bar charts and line graph below show the results of a survey conducted over a three-year period to discover what people who live in London think of the city. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows bar graphs comparing percentages across three years for six categories: Range of shops (Year 1: 45%, Year 2: 42%, Year 3: 44%), Job opportunities (Year 1: 38%, Year 2: 34%, Year 3: 36%), Mixture of people (Year 1: 37%, Year 2: 32%, Year 3: 35%), Museums & Art galleries (Year 1: 18%, Year 2: 22%, Year 3: 22%), Night life (Year 1: 20%, Year 2: 22%, Year 3: 21%), Transport (Year 1: 25%, Year 2: 24%, Year 3: 23%).

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The above bar charts and line graphs illustrate the outcome of an analysis that was conducted over a time period of three years to capture the thinking of the residents of London City.

The bar charts and line graphs show that people of London are more interested in building shops for their livelihood. Therefore, the number of shops is increasing in one of the largest cities of England.

Firstly, the number of shops in one year was a little bit below half of one hundred percent. There was a gradual decrease in shop count with the passage of time; therefore, in two years, the figure decreased from 45 to 42 percent. The range of shops was directly proportional to job opportunities and vice versa. Thus, in one year, most people did have a job.

Secondly, the transport system in 3 years was one quarter of one percent. People were preferring transport in order to earn a living. In one year, people shifted from transport to some other means of livelihood; thus, it decreased up to 22 percent. The second year was the lowest among the three.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 4

shops: 4

percent: 4

years: 3

transport: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant issues. The summary is not comprehensive, focusing heavily on shops and transport while omitting other categories. The analysis includes inaccurate interpretations and unsupported claims, such as the direct proportionality between shops and job opportunities. The writing lacks coherence and clarity, making it difficult to follow the main points. To improve, focus on summarizing all key features of the data, providing accurate interpretations, and organizing the information logically with clear transitions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear overview of the main trends and comparisons. The information is not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the key features of the data. Paragraphing could be improved to group related information together more effectively. For example, you could dedicate a paragraph to the categories with the highest percentages and another to those with the lowest.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive. There are instances of imprecise word choice. For example, 'thinking of the residents' could be rephrased for better clarity. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends, comparisons, and data analysis to enhance the report. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. For example, 'people of London are more interested in building shops for their livelihood' is not accurate based on the data provided. Sentence structure could be varied to improve the flow and readability of the report. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate use of articles.

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