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Band 4+: The bar charts show the result of a Greek survey from two selected age groups in 2003 on the relative importance of five factors in choosing a carrier.

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The image shows three bar charts: the first for the 20-30 age group where factors influencing career choice include Interest (36), Income (27), Benefits (11), and Location (9), the second for the 40-50 age group where factors include Benefits (25), Income (24), Interest (20), and Least Commute Time (15), and the third for the 60+ age group where factors are Benefits (36), Least Commute Time (26), Income (24), and Interest (10).

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The bar charts provided illustrate the main reasons for selecting a job position by people in two different age groups.The data covered the year 2003. What is undisputed however is, the parents and money were always the majority of contribution.

Also as age advanced, the share of money and role model saw a dramatic decline but nevertheless the effect of teachers and friends increased with 5% and 3% respectively.

Meanwhile the figure of money with 7% decline fell to 19% and on the contrary the parents pattern with 7% growth with 30% was the most effective item, for choosing a job in the 40 to 50 age group.

In conclusion, although the share of money and parents had a significant impact, with the passage of time , the pattern of money declined and the trend of parent increased.

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