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Band 4+: The bar graph above shows average earnings in Ireland in 5 different years,with projections for the future.

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The image presents a horizontal bar graph with data across eight years: 1968—approx. 10,000; 1978—approx. 12,000; 1988—approx. 11,000; 1998—approx. 12,000; 2008—approx. 10,000; 2018—approx. 18,000.

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The line graph displays the average earning in the republic of Ireland in different period with projections for the future.

Overall, it is clear that the wage is slightly increased throughout the period except 2008 after that salaries are expected to increase sharply in the future.

In 1968 many people in Ireland earned approximately $8000 average this image rose steadily about $11,000 in 1978 and then increase to roughly $13,000 in 1988 and earning has grown around $15,000 trend.

Moreover, in 2008 there is a small decrease approximately $14,000 and this dropped earnings and rights are in 2018 reach in 19,000 USD dollar which is the highest point to show in the given data.

At the end, it can be concluded that the chart shows the gender of a trends in earning in Ireland over the period of times.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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period: 3

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Task Response

The response attempts to describe the bar graph but contains significant inaccuracies in the data reported. The overall trends are mentioned, but the lack of accurate data and some misinterpretations affect the clarity and reliability of the report. To improve, focus on accurately extracting and reporting the data from the graph. Pay close attention to the values and units, and ensure that the trends you describe are supported by the data. Also, avoid introducing information not present in the graph. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The flow of information is disrupted by abrupt transitions and a lack of cohesive devices. For instance, the shift from discussing earnings in 1988 to 2008 feels disjointed. To improve coherence, use transition words and phrases to connect ideas and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data. Also, the conclusion is not very effective and doesn't summarize the key trends adequately.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the trends and data. For example, using 'increase' and 'decrease' repeatedly without synonyms makes the writing monotonous. To enhance lexical resource, incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'fluctuated,' 'plateaued,' 'soared') and earnings (e.g., 'income,' 'remuneration,' 'compensation').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. Subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect tense usage, and awkward phrasing are prevalent. For example, 'wage is slightly increased' should be 'wages slightly increased' or 'there was a slight increase in wages.' To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread the report for errors and focus on using correct verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct mistakes.

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