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Band 6+: The bar graph shows the average hours of daily sunshine throughout the year in two cities of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows average daily sunshine hours for Sydney and Perth: January - Sydney: 8, Perth: 11; February - Sydney: 7, Perth: 10; March - Sydney: 7, Perth: 9; April - Sydney: 7, Perth: 8; May - Sydney: 6, Perth: 7; June - Sydney: 5, Perth: 6; July - Sydney: 6, Perth: 6; August - Sydney: 7, Perth: 7; September - Sydney: 8, Perth: 8; October - Sydney: 9, Perth: 9; November - Sydney: 9, Perth: 10; December - Sydney: 9, Perth: 11.

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The bar graph compares the standard number of sunlight hours per day in Sydney versus Perth, Australia.

Overall, it is clear that Perth has the highest average sunshine for almost all of the months, whereas Sydney has low sunshine duration per day.

In terms of Perth, for the first three months, January to March, the typical sunshine is 11, 10, and 7 hours per day, which is the highest of every months. By contrast, Sydney has sunbeams for six months, with a fluctuation of 8, 7, and 6 hours per day, which is almost the same number of daylight span per day.

From July to August, the conventional daylight hours per day increased to 7 and 8 hours for three months. After that, the sunshine remained stable at 8 hours for all months. Moreover, in Perth, July and August have the same sunshine hours per day. However, the most noticeable increase in sunbeams is from September to December.

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hours: 7

months: 6

sunshine: 5

perth: 4

sydney: 3

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The report identifies some key features and makes some comparisons, but there are inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the data is not always precise, and the organization could be improved. To improve, focus on providing more accurate data and structuring the report more logically, perhaps by grouping months with similar trends together.

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The report presents a general overview and attempts to highlight key trends, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. Consider structuring the report with a clearer distinction between the overall trends and specific details. Paragraphing is generally adequate, but transitions between ideas could be smoother to enhance coherence.

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The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some word choices are not entirely accurate or natural ('sunbeams,' 'daylight span'). Expanding the range of vocabulary related to weather and geographical comparisons would enhance the report. Focus on using more precise and appropriate terms to describe the data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, the sentence structure in the third paragraph is somewhat awkward. Review and correct grammatical errors, paying attention to sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Aim for more precise and concise phrasing to improve the overall accuracy of the report.

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