Bar Chart

Band 5+: The bar graph shows the number of male and female research students studying six subjects at us university in 2011

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The bar graph shows the number of male and female research students studying six subjects at us university in 2011

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image displays a bar graph detailing numbers of male and female research students across six subjects at a US university in 2011. In Linguistics, females number about 110, males about 90; in Psychology, females count approximately 100, males roughly 50; in Natural Science, females are around 200, males about 190; in Engineering, males total about 150, with females around 40; in Programming, males number about 210, females close to 10; in Mathematics, males are near 180, with females approximately 40.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The bar graph illustrates a number of students doing research in six different subjects in a US university in 2011. The equal proportion of around 200 boys and girls were exploring Natural Sciences, whereas Psychology was opted by 200 males and 175 females for research. Linguistics was the 3rd major subject choosen by 120 girls and 75 boys. Mathematics was selected for analysing by over 200 males and less than 50 females. Programming has widely been choosen by males rather than females. Engineering opted by 150 boys and less than 100 girls.

The substantial number of boys preferred research in Natural Science, Psychology and Mathematics, On the other side, females highly opted Natural Science, Psychology and Linguistics for exploration. In comparison to all subjects the majority of girls prioritize linguistics while boys least opted that subject.

In conclusion there is no denying that boys were large in numbers in studying all subjects, except linguistics. Hence, natural science was the only field choosen by equal number of girls and boys, whereas in all other subjects girls remain low in numbers.

Word Count: 179

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

girls: 5

subjects: 4

natural: 4

opted: 4

females: 4

linguistics: 4

number: 3

research: 3

psychology: 3

males: 3

choosen: 3

science: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the bar graph and comparing male and female numbers across subjects. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Psychology numbers, Linguistics numbers, Mathematics numbers) and some irrelevant or inappropriate statements (e.g., 'equal proportion of around 200' for Natural Science, which is not accurate). The overall structure is present, but the inclusion of incorrect data detracts from task achievement. To improve, ensure data accuracy by carefully reading the visual, and avoid making unsupported claims. Focus on summarizing key trends and comparisons without introducing errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure but lacks clear paragraphing and transitions. The data is presented in a somewhat disjointed manner, and the conclusion does not fully summarize the main trends. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure a smooth flow between sentences. Avoid listing data without connecting ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but repetitive and lacks sophistication. Words like 'choosen' (chosen) and 'opt' are used incorrectly. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms (e.g., 'selected', 'pursued', 'undertook') and more precise terms (e.g., 'approximately' instead of 'around'). Avoid informal phrasing like 'boys' and 'girls' in academic writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('the equal proportion... were'), incorrect verb forms ('choosen'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are mostly simple. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice) and proofread for common errors. Punctuation needs attention (e.g., missing commas).

Answers On The Same Topic:

The bar graph shows the number of male and female research students studying six subjects at us university in 2011

The bar graph illustrates the satistic of both gender research learner of lecturing six subjects at us university in one period of year 2011. Overall, Natural Science was significant subject among other 6 subjects of the year for both gender while female were not tend to study mathematics. However, the similarity of male whom preferred […]

Band 5+

The bar graph shows the number of male and female research students studying six subjects at us university in 2011

The bar chart provides data about the numbers of male and female research students who receive lessons for six subjects at a US university in 2011. Overall, male students were dominated females except for the subjects of linguistics and natural science, with huge differences in the same period. Looking at the ends of the scale […]

Band 6+

The bar graph shows the number of male and female research students studying six subjects at us university in 2011

The bar graph shown below depicts, the number of research acquaintances including male and female who were studying six subjects at a US university in the year 2011. Overall,the data shows that the natural science was mostly preferred by everyone at university as compared to other subjects. Firstly, among all six subjects, natural science is […]

Band 5+

See All

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Spending in Thousand Pound Sterling.

The given chart reveals the amount of money spent on six types of consumer goods in each of the four countries. Overall, It is clear that British people spent significantly more money than people in the other three countries on all six goods. Of the six items, consumers spent the most money on photographic film. […]

Band 8+

The chart gives information about the proportion of students choosing diﬀerent science subjects in a university in 1992 and 2000.

The bar chart compares the percentage of students who chose between three science disciplines in a university from 1992 to 2012. Overall, the figures for males fell, while females rose. As for science subjects, the proportion of students taking biology and physics decreased; however, the share of undergraduates who applied for computer science increased dramatically. […]

Band 8+

The bar chart shows the percentage of people in the united kingdom per age group without any qualifications.

The bar chart compares the proportion of unqualified people across various age groups in the United Kingdom in the year of 2009. Overall, the figure of both non-qualified men and women generally increased across different age groups. The highest percentage was recorded among women aged 50-59/64, while the lowest figure was seen also among women […]

Band 6+

The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

The bar charts below demonstrate two week period data about price for tickets on airplane on the line between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia in 2013. Overall,three days in both weeks on airline, Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday was most stable. In contrast, on Monday price of tickets fell dramatically, while on the rest of the days […]

Band 5+

The graph below presents the information about Nathan's Hot Dog Eating Contest in Brooklyn's Coney Island, USA.

The chart illustrates the current record of Nathan’s hot dog eating contest which is 68 hot dogs and buns consumed in 15 minutes. This contest is held in Brooklyn’s coney island every 4th of July by American Joey Chestnut, where Takeru of Japan won 6 years in a row. Overall, the US citizens won most […]

Band 5+

The charts below show the marriage and divorce rates in the UK, Sweden, and Italy for the years 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below give a comparison in marriage and divorce rate within UK, sweden, and italy for the years 2000 and 2020. Overall, the rate of marriages in the following three countries appears to experience a significant decline ( especially in the UK and italy where it decreased by approximately half ), meanwhile sweden […]

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium