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Band 4+: The bar graph. "the chart below gives information about UK's ageing population in 1985, with future predictions for 2035".

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The image displays percentage data of the population aged 65 and over across different regions: in 1985, England had approximately 15%, Wales about 17%, Scotland around 15%, Northern Ireland nearly 12%, and the UK approximately 15%; predictions for 2035 show England at 20%, Wales at 25%, Scotland at 25%, Northern Ireland at 20%, and the UK at roughly 23%.

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The bar chart illustrates data about UK’s ageing residents in 1985, with future plans for 2035. After this chart gives information about persentages of population aged 65 and over.

Overall, this chart is comparing countries, such as England, Wales, Scotland, Northern Ireland, the UK. And shows persentages with years between 1985 and 2035, after this chart is predicting half of population in 2035.

On the one hand, If we look at 1985, England and the UK was equally and comprised 15%. Wales was most high than other and, Scotland with Wales accounted for approximately 15%, and Northern Ireland got most low persentage and comprised between 10% and 15% of persentages

On the other hand, if we look at 2035, England, Northern Ireland, the UK was same persentages of this chart. Wales in prediction was most high than other and comprised almost 25%. Finally Scotland was accounted for 25% in prediction of 2035.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

chart: 5

wales: 4

persentages: 3

england: 3

scotland: 3

northern: 3

ireland: 3

comprised: 3

other: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some areas for improvement. The organization is present but could be clearer, and the language contains inaccuracies. To improve, focus on using more precise language and ensuring grammatical accuracy. Also, aim for a more sophisticated analysis by comparing and contrasting the data more effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The introduction is weak, and the overview is not well-defined. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions, making it difficult to follow the comparisons and trends. Paragraphing needs improvement to enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the data. The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary related to trends, comparisons, and predictions. For example, instead of 'most high,' consider using 'highest' or 'largest.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. Punctuation errors are also present. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence construction to enhance clarity.

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