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Band 5+: The bar graphs show percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in 4 countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents bar graphs depicting employment percentages for men and women aged 60-64 in Belgium, USA, Japan, and Indonesia for the years 1970 and 2020. In 1970, Belgium shows men at 60% and women at 10%; USA shows men at 80% and women at 40%; Japan shows men at 76% and women at 40%; Indonesia shows men at 66% and women at 50%. In 2020, Belgium shows men at 45% and women at 35%; USA shows men at 60% and women at 38%; Japan shows men at 58% and women at 32%; Indonesia shows men at 56% and women at 48%.

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Either the graphs show us the differences between 1970 and 2020 employments in 4 different countries. As we can see, there is a comparison between men and women.

First of all, in the men’s section, after thirty years employment grew most in USA, and on the contrary, among women it decreased.

From a logical perspective, that is quite reasonable, because the societal need for women has diminished over time. Especially we can see that the most decrease was in Belgium after thirty years. But the needs of women in the USA didn’t demand too much,so it shows us that changes in environment are not for all. In Japan, we can see that women’s employment plumetted in a few years, and Indonesians stayed the same but almost increased slightly, that’s not that bad.

Overall, despite some fluctuations, the general trend was upward. It shows strong growth over time.

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The report attempts to address the task but contains significant issues. The summary of the data is inaccurate and includes subjective interpretations rather than objective descriptions. The organization is weak, and the analysis lacks specific data references. To improve, focus on accurately describing the data with specific figures, organizing the information logically (e.g., by country or gender), and avoiding personal opinions or unsupported claims. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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