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Band 4+: The bar graphs show percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in 4 countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents bar graphs depicting employment percentages for men and women aged 60-64 in Belgium, USA, Japan, and Indonesia for the years 1970 and 2020. In 1970, Belgium shows men at 60% and women at 10%; USA shows men at 80% and women at 40%; Japan shows men at 76% and women at 40%; Indonesia shows men at 66% and women at 50%. In 2020, Belgium shows men at 45% and women at 35%; USA shows men at 60% and women at 38%; Japan shows men at 58% and women at 32%; Indonesia shows men at 56% and women at 48%.

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The bar charts illustrates the persentage of two sex whoes aged between 60 to 64 those worked in 4 different nations in two different years.

overall, in both charts USA was on the top in old-age workers and in Japan numbers of man worker are moe than women and it is increased drametically in other graph.

In 1970 USA was on the peaked where employed age is between 60 to 64. Men are 86% and women are approximetly 79% in addition in to Indonesia is the second nations that had highest number of mature adults worked 84% men are employed and compare to women are only 65% who employed at age of 60 to 64. Moreover, in Belgium 84% men are worked in their old age era and apporoximatlay 63% women are worked. As well as in japan the rasio was 75% and apporoximetaly 56% in men and women respectively.

Afyer 5 decades these rasio was changed, USA was peaked and employment percatange was almost 80% men and 48% women. It increased after 1970 in both genders. In Indonasia’s employed rise with approximently 4% in men and in women

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women: 7

worked: 4

employed: 4

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. It misreports key data (e.g., USA percentages, Belgium figures) and fails to accurately describe the trends for all countries. The overview is vague and not fully supported by the data. To improve, ensure all main features are accurately reported, make clear comparisons between countries and years, and avoid introducing incorrect figures. Focus on summarizing the main trends and differences without unnecessary detail.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information by time periods, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. The introduction lacks a clear overview, and the body paragraphs mix data from different countries without clear signposting. The conclusion is incomplete and does not summarize the main trends effectively. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph, ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect (e.g., one paragraph for 1970, one for 2020), and provide a clear overall summary of the main trends.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with several spelling errors (e.g., 'persentage', 'whoses', 'moe', 'drametically', 'approximetly', 'rasio', 'percatange', 'Indonasia'). There is some attempt to use synonyms (e.g., 'peaked', 'top', 'highest'), but the range is narrow and often inaccurate. To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'proportion', 'figure', 'significant increase', 'slight decline'), and ensure correct spelling and word choice. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('charts illustrates'), incorrect pluralization ('two sex'), misuse of articles ('the persentage of two sex'), and inconsistent verb tenses. Sentence structures are often incomplete or run-on, and punctuation is frequently missing. To improve, focus on writing clear, simple sentences with correct subject-verb agreement, use appropriate tenses (past for 1970 and 2020), and proofread for punctuation and article usage.

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