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Band 5+: The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Image for topic: The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a bar chart and a table. The bar chart lists salaries for five professions labeled as Police, Nurse, Teacher, Firefighter, and Underground Driver. The starting salaries in pounds are: Police: £21,000, Nurse: £18,000, Teacher: £21,000, Firefighter: £22,000, and Underground Driver: £32,000. Salaries after three years are: Police: £36,000, Nurse: £22,000, Teacher: £31,000, Firefighter: £34,000, and Underground Driver: £51,000. The table shows average weekly working hours: Police: 40, Nurse: 38, Teacher: 55, Firefighter: 55, and Underground Driver: 36. The date shown is 08-04-2023.

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The chart reveals information about the salary changes in various professions in three years. Most of the professions salaries did not have significant raise through out the day they started and after three years.

With the help of the average working of hours per week table it is clear to say that even their salaries have the same slight rise, their working ours are way more different then each other. An average underground driver has a 36 working hours per week which is less than an average police officer. However driver’s salary started around 50K pounds and a police officer’s salary started with 20K pounds.

Among all of the professions teachers and firefighters have the most working hours per week but we cannot tell the same amount of salary they get for their working hours.

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professions: 3

started: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some features of the data but lacks detail and accuracy. The overview is weak and doesn't provide a clear summary of the main trends. The report also contains inaccuracies in the reported data. To improve, focus on providing a more comprehensive overview, accurately reporting the data, and making more specific comparisons between the professions. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents some relevant information, but the organization and flow of ideas could be improved. The introduction is somewhat vague. The second paragraph attempts to connect salary and working hours but lacks clear transitions and specific comparisons. The final paragraph introduces another comparison but feels disconnected. To improve coherence, use clearer topic sentences for each paragraph, focus on specific comparisons, and use transition words to link ideas.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary. There are instances of imprecise word choice. To enhance lexical resource, try to use synonyms and a wider range of vocabulary related to salary, working hours, and professions. For example, instead of 'significant raise,' consider using 'substantial increase' or 'considerable growth.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('did not have significant raise'), subject-verb agreement issues ('professions salaries'), and awkward phrasing ('through out the day they started'). There are also issues with sentence structure and clarity. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using correct verb tenses, ensuring subject-verb agreement, and constructing clear and concise sentences. Proofreading carefully for errors is essential.

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