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Band 5+: The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar graph labeled 'Salary comparison' with two sets of data for 'Salary When Started' and 'Salary after three years' across five professions: Police, Nurse, Teacher, Firefighter, Underground Driver; each profession's starting salaries are as follows - Police: £30,000, Nurse: £20,000, Teacher: £25,000, Firefighter: £25,000, Underground Driver: £35,000; their respective salaries after three years are - Police: £45,000, Nurse: £30,000, Teacher: £35,000, Firefighter: £40,000, Underground Driver: £50,000; additionally, a table on the right lists 'Profession' and 'Average working hours per week' with corresponding values - Police: 40 hours, Nurse: 38 hours, Teacher: 55 hours, Firefighter: 55 hours, Underground Driver: 36 hours.

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The bar chart illustrates several professions including police, nurse, firefighter, and underground driver and their salaries. The table compares the average of working hours per week.

In general, underground drivers earn the highest pay, while they working the fewest hours. Also, firefighters work the longest hours per week. In addition, most job salaries experience minor increases after three years of experience.

Underground driver is payed with higest salary at 50000 pounds when started, after three years, it is increased 1000 pounds. In this job, people must work for 36 hours. Looking forward to firefighter, they have to work for 55 hours and earn for 40000 pounds when started. After three years, they will receive 1000 more.

With a 40 hours of working every week, police officers earn a steady starting salary near 22000 pounds, showing little change over the three-year period at 23000 pounds. Moving on to nurses, which receive the lowest salary at around 18000 at the beginning, and increase to 19000 after three years, while they have to work for 38 hours.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

hours: 7

pounds: 5

after: 4

three: 4

years: 4

working: 3

salary: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main features of the chart and table, and makes some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., underground driver's salary after three years, firefighter's salary, police and nurse salaries) and some omissions (e.g., teacher's data is missing). The structure is clear, but the language contains errors and informal expressions. To improve, ensure all professions are covered, use accurate data, and maintain a formal academic tone.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for specific professions. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'Looking forward to firefighter' is awkward and does not smoothly connect ideas. Additionally, the report does not cover all professions (Teacher is missing) and the final paragraph introduces data that seems inconsistent with the visual description, which may confuse the reader. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly') to link ideas more naturally.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'illustrates', 'compares', 'earn', 'receive'). However, there are several lexical inaccuracies and informal choices, such as 'payed' (should be 'paid'), 'higest' (should be 'highest'), and 'Looking forward to' (misused). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of basic terms like 'earn' and 'work'. To improve, use a wider variety of precise terms (e.g., 'remuneration', 'compensation', 'weekly hours', 'substantial increase') and ensure correct word forms and collocations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates some variety in sentence structures, including complex sentences. However, there are noticeable grammar errors that affect clarity, such as 'they working the fewest hours' (missing auxiliary verb), 'Underground driver is payed with higest salary' (incorrect passive and spelling), and 'it is increased 1000 pounds' (incorrect verb form and missing preposition). Punctuation is mostly correct, but there are run-on sentences and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct verb tenses, and using a mix of simple and complex structures with greater accuracy.

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Band 5+: The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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