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Band 5+: The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar graph labeled 'Salary comparison' with two sets of data for 'Salary When Started' and 'Salary after three years' across five professions: Police, Nurse, Teacher, Firefighter, Underground Driver; each profession's starting salaries are as follows - Police: £30,000, Nurse: £20,000, Teacher: £25,000, Firefighter: £25,000, Underground Driver: £35,000; their respective salaries after three years are - Police: £45,000, Nurse: £30,000, Teacher: £35,000, Firefighter: £40,000, Underground Driver: £50,000; additionally, a table on the right lists 'Profession' and 'Average working hours per week' with corresponding values - Police: 40 hours, Nurse: 38 hours, Teacher: 55 hours, Firefighter: 55 hours, Underground Driver: 36 hours.

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The graph illustrates the salary comparison over the years between some different professions.

Overall, underground driver is the best paid job according to the graph, with a salary that reaches the 50,000 pounds per year in the beginning and aproximately 52,000 pounds after three years of working.

Following the list of the best salaries we find firefighter with around 40,000 pounds a year in the beginning and 42,000 pounds after three years and Teacher with a salary of 32,000 pounds per year in the beginning that increases to 35,000 pounds a year after three years of working. It is also clearly shown that firefighters and teachers are also the ones that dedicate the most hours during the week, being 55 hours each job in total.

Finally, it’s Police, winning around 22,000 pounds a year when they first start, being this profession the only one with a very low difference between the salary after three years of work. And the last one in the list wouold be Nursing with an average salary of 15,000 pounds to start and increasing it to 18,000 pounds after three years.

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years: 6

salary: 5

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Task Response

The report attempts to address all parts of the task, including both the bar chart and the table. However, there are significant inaccuracies in the data reported compared to the visual description provided. For instance, the starting and ending salaries for almost every profession deviate significantly from the provided values. While the report identifies the main trends and makes some comparisons regarding working hours, the heavy reliance on incorrect data points detracts from the overall task achievement. To improve, ensure that the numbers extracted from the visuals are transcribed accurately and that the overview clearly summarizes the main trends without getting bogged down in specific (and potentially incorrect) figures too early.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical progression by grouping professions based on salary levels, which is a good strategy. However, the cohesion is weakened by repetitive sentence structures and somewhat awkward transitions (e.g., 'Following the list of...', 'Finally, it's Police...'). To improve, use a wider variety of cohesive devices and linking words to connect ideas more smoothly. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that the transition between the bar chart data and the table data is more seamless.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is functional but limited and repetitive. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'aproximately', 'wouold') and some awkward phrasing (e.g., 'winning around 22,000 pounds', 'being this profession the only one'). To reach a higher band, aim for more precise academic vocabulary when describing trends (e.g., 'remained relatively stable', 'experienced a significant increase') and avoid informal expressions. Work on using more varied synonyms for 'salary' and 'profession'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are frequent errors that occasionally impede clarity. Issues include article usage (e.g., 'underground driver' instead of 'the underground driver'), subject-verb agreement, and awkward clause constructions (e.g., 'being this profession the only one...'). Focus on improving sentence structure accuracy, particularly when using participle clauses, and ensure that punctuation is used correctly to separate distinct ideas.

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