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Band 6+: The chart above shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents two pie charts detailing reasons for commuting by bicycle and car; the first chart shows cycling reasons with 30% each for health and fitness as well as faster than driving, 15% for no costs, 12% for less pollution, and 13% for no parking problems; the second chart outlines driving reasons with 40% for comfort, 21% for distance to work, 14% for safer than cycling, 11% for need to carry things to work, and 14% for faster than cycling.

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The pie charts compare the reasons why people choose to commute to work by car or bicycle.

Overall, more individuals prefer cycling to work mainly due to health and carbon footprint that it can reduce. Regarding car users, they contribute the largest share because of the comfort. Meanwhile, the lowest share of cyclists consider that riding a bike is faster than cars.

According to the chart, both fractions demonstrate that 30% of individuals cycle to work in order to maintain good health and not contaminate the environment, demonstrating it as a primary reason. The reason which ranks second is that cycling doesn’t cause parking issues, which accounted for a tenth. However, only 12% of workers ride bicycles, considering that it is faster, while just 13% use bicycles because it is inexpensive.

Meanwhile, just under a fifth percentage points travel to work by car because of the comfort. However, 14% of car users commute to work by those transports since their workplaces are far from their houses and for being faster than riding a bicycle. Moreover, cars are convenient transports in order to carry items to work, which allocate for over a fifth, whereas the lowest proportion is 11% due to the safety.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing both charts and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. For example, the report states that 30% cycle for health and 'carbon footprint' (which is not a stated reason), and it incorrectly identifies the lowest cycling reason as 'faster than cars' (which is actually 30%, tied for the highest). For car users, the report misstates the percentage for comfort (saying 'just under a fifth' instead of 40%) and misallocates the reasons for distance and speed. To improve, ensure that all data is accurately reported and that the main features are clearly identified. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'a tenth' when exact figures are available, and make sure comparisons are clear and supported by the data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'both fractions demonstrate', 'those transports'). The overview could be more precise, and the body paragraphs would benefit from clearer topic sentences and smoother transitions between ideas. Ensure that each paragraph focuses on one main point and that comparisons are clearly linked.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some word choices are imprecise or unnatural (e.g., 'carbon footprint that it can reduce', 'not contaminate the environment', 'allocate for over a fifth'). The report would benefit from more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'environmental benefits' instead of 'carbon footprint', and 'account for' instead of 'allocate for'. Also, avoid repetition of 'faster' and 'comfort' by using synonyms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward constructions that affect clarity. For example, 'just under a fifth percentage points' is incorrect, and 'which allocate for over a fifth' is ungrammatical. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, focus on sentence structure, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct prepositions. Proofreading for these errors will enhance accuracy.

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