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Band 5+: The chart and graph show the categories of the workforce in London and the unemployment rate within three groups. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a pie chart displaying workforce proportions: 50% native Londoners, 42% non-English-speaking people, 8% English-speaking people; and a line graph displaying unemployment rates from 1993 to 2003 where native Londoners rates decrease from 6% to 3%, English-speaking people rates decrease from 9% to around 1%, non-English-speaking people rates decrease from 5% to around 2%.

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The pie chart illustrates the distribution of workforce in London among three distinct groups,while the line graph shows the changes in unemployment rates for these same categories between 1993 and 2003.

Overall,native Londoners made up the largest portion of the workforce.While unemployment rates declined for all three groups throughout the decade, individuals who did not speak english consistently faced significantly higher levels of joblessness compared to the other two categories

To sum up,the line graph the unemployment rate for non English speakers started at 8% in 1993.Although it fluctuated,it saw a downward trend, ending at roughly 4%.The rates for the other two groups remained much lower,finishing at beetween 1% and 2% in 2003.

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The report covers the main features of both the pie chart and the line graph, and it makes some relevant comparisons. However, there are some omissions, particularly regarding the specific data points in the pie chart. To improve, provide more specific data from the pie chart and ensure that all key trends and figures from the line graph are mentioned. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and identifies some key trends, but the organization could be improved for better flow. The 'To sum up' paragraph introduces specific data points but lacks clear connection to the preceding overview, making the structure somewhat disjointed. Consider using more transitional phrases to link ideas and ensure a smoother progression from general observations to specific details. For example, you could integrate the specific data into the body paragraphs rather than isolating them in a concluding paragraph.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate and conveys the information effectively. However, there's room to enhance the range and precision of word choices. For instance, instead of 'made up the largest portion,' you could use 'constituted the majority' or 'represented the largest segment.' Similarly, consider varying the language used to describe the changes in unemployment rates (e.g., 'decreased,' 'fell,' 'declined sharply').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'the line graph the unemployment rate' is missing a verb. Also, 'beetween' is a misspelling. While the overall meaning is understandable, these errors detract from the report's professionalism. Focus on proofreading carefully to catch such mistakes. Also, ensure correct subject-verb agreement and article usage.

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