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The image includes a bar graph and a table detailing Japan's population trends. Bar graph data (population in millions): 1950: 84.1, 1955: 90.4, 1960: 94.3, 1965: 99.2, 1970: 104.5, 1975: 111.9, 1980: 117, 1985: 121, 1990: 123.6, 1995: 125.6, 2000: 126.9, 2005: 127.8, 2010: 127.1, 2015: 125.4, 2055: 89.9. Table data: 1950: 4.1 million aged 65 years or over, 4.9% of total population; 2005: 25.7 million aged 65 years or over, 20.0%; 2035: 37.2 million aged 65 years or over, 34.0%; 2055: 36.5 million aged 65 years or over, 41.0%.

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Tha bar chart , and the table illustrates the propotion about the past ,present and the future trends of Japan’s population.

Overall, the population aged 65 years or over beside the percentage saw a significant rise from 1950 until 2055, despite this increase the general population of Japan is decreased since 2010,respectively.

The total population of Japan increased between 1950 to 2010 with 127.8 , which saw a very dramatic decreased just after that with 1% of the total, then it keeps fell down untill 89.9 in 2055.

Even the total population decreased, but the percentage of the aged peoples 65 years or over increases with 36% , from 4.9% to 41.0% , although the score of the persons get up from 4.1 million to 36.5 million with 31 million people, From 1950 tp 2055.

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends in the data, including the overall population changes and the increasing proportion of elderly people. However, there are some areas for improvement. The language could be more precise and sophisticated, and the report could benefit from more specific data references to support the general trends mentioned. Also, ensure correct spelling and grammar throughout the report. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main points. Paragraphing is present but does not effectively separate distinct ideas. Consider organizing the information more logically, perhaps by discussing the overall population trends first, followed by the trends in the aged population. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and sentences together more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate ('propotion' instead of 'proportion,' 'score' instead of 'number'). There is a lack of precision in describing the data. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to population trends (e.g., growth, decline, increase, decrease, projection, demographic). Focus on using more precise language to describe the data and avoid vague terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Practice writing simple, clear sentences before attempting more complex structures.

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