Bar Chart

Band 5+: The chart below gives information about library borrowing in UK public libraries over a 10-year period from 1995 to 2005.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The chart below gives information about library borrowing in UK public libraries over a 10-year period from 1995 to 2005.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image displays a stacked bar chart featuring a vertical axis with values from 0 to 1400 in increments of 200, and a horizontal axis labeled "Year" containing three entries: 1995, 2000, and 2005. A legend beneath the horizontal axis defines four categories from bottom to top: "Adult Fiction (in millions)", "Adult Non-Fiction (in millions)", "Children's Books (in millions)", and "Top Audio-Visual Material (in millions)". For the year 1995, the segment values from bottom to top are 330, 1113, 107, and 28. For the year 2000, the segment values from bottom to top are 280, 161, 114, and 33. For the year 2005, the segment values from bottom to top are 230, 110, 104, and 60.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The bar chart illustrates the details regarding to the libarary that were shared in United Kingdom in public libararies between 1995 and 2005.

Overall, it is evident that adults non-fiction and adult fiction were the mostly borrowed books over the years. Whereas, top audio-visual material showed lowest lease for whole period.The only type of book saw a fluctuation was the childrens book.

In 1995, the highest demand for adult fiction was 1113 in millions, which decreased steadly to 110. Similarly, adult non fiction books were most borrowed/leased books in UK with 330 million in the beggining of the year, and went down to 100 millions by 2005.

Subsequently,childrens books were least popular books in 2005, while it was 107 10 years ago, then it witnessed marginal increase by 2000 accounting 114 million.Moreover,childrens book dropped to 104 by the end of the year and ranked third. However, top audition visual material books were the only type that demonstrated lowest figure among others in the given period. Its starting figure was 28, and experienced gradual rise reaching to 60 by 2005.

Word Count: 179

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

books: 6

adult: 3

fiction: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for adult fiction and non-fiction is incorrectly reported (e.g., adult fiction is stated as 1113 million in 1995, but the correct value is 330 million; adult non-fiction is stated as 330 million, but the correct value is 1113 million). Additionally, the trend for adult fiction is described as decreasing to 110, but the correct value for 2005 is 230 million. The report also omits the value for adult non-fiction in 2005 (110 million). The language is sometimes unclear (e.g., 'libarary', 'steadly', 'beggining', 'audition visual material'). To improve, ensure accurate data extraction and proofread for spelling and clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'the only type of book saw a fluctuation' is awkward and unclear. Additionally, the paragraphing could be improved by separating the discussion of each category more clearly. To enhance coherence, use clear topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. Also, use cohesive devices such as 'in contrast' or 'similarly' to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some repetition and imprecise word choices. For instance, 'lease' is used incorrectly instead of 'borrowed', and 'steadly' is a misspelling. There is also a lack of variety in describing trends (e.g., 'decreased', 'went down', 'dropped'). To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'declined', 'experienced a fall', 'saw a downward trend'). Additionally, ensure correct spelling and word forms (e.g., 'children's' instead of 'childrens').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'regarding to' should be 'regarding', 'libarary' should be 'library', and 'beggining' should be 'beginning'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and sentence structure (e.g., 'The only type of book saw a fluctuation' should be 'The only type of book that saw a fluctuation was...'). To improve, proofread carefully and use a variety of complex structures, such as relative clauses and conditional sentences, while ensuring accuracy. Pay attention to articles and prepositions.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The chart below gives information about library borrowing in UK public libraries over a 10-year period from 1995 to 2005.

The chart shows materials borrowed from the UK public library over ten years. The bar chart presents data on borrowed library materials in the UK from 1995 to 2005. The units are measured in millions. Overall, the number of Adult Non-Fiction was by far the most borrowed category despite experiencing a substantial decrease over the […]

Band 8+

The chart below gives information about library borrowing in UK public libraries over a 10-year period from 1995 to 2005.

The bar chart compares data about books borrowed from municipal libraries in United Kingdom from year 1995 to 2005. Overall, the number of libraries borrowing gradually dropped over the years across most genres. While adult non-fiction and fiction registered a downward trend, children’s literature remained relatively stable and audio-visuals emerged as the most picked one. […]

Band 8+

The chart below gives information about library borrowing in UK public libraries over a 10-year period from 1995 to 2005.

The bar graph demonstrates the data on the books borrowed from the UK public library between 1995 and 2005. The numbers are given in millions. Overall, the borrowing rates decreased in all types of books, Adult fiction, Adult non fiction, and Children’s Books. However, the Top audio visual material borrowed increased over the given periods. […]

Band 5+

The chart below gives information about library borrowing in UK public libraries over a 10-year period from 1995 to 2005.

The bar chart illustrates the information about borrowed three books and the top audio-visual materials over a decade, by 1995, 2000 and 2005. Overall, it is clear that all borrowed three books experienced a downward trend in the end of the year, while adult non-fiction was the highest number of borrowed book. However, audio-visual material […]

Band 6+

The chart below gives information about library borrowing in UK public libraries over a 10-year period from 1995 to 2005.

The bar chart below provides information about borrowing in UK public libraries from 1995 to 2005 divided by 3 parts. Overall, it can be seen that Adult Non-Function received the highest rank in the first dozen from information. The proportion of borrowing was decreased to the last period. The Adult Non-Function was ranked to the […]

Band 4+

See All

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people living alone in five different age groups in the United States between 1850 and 2000.

The bar chart provides information about people in percentage terms, living alone in five various age groups in the USA from 1850 to 2000. Overall, the 55-64 and 47-54 aged people saw a notable increase, whereas the other 17-26, 27-36 and 37-46 aged groups remained relatively stable with some fluctuation throughout the period. Starting with […]

Band 6+

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people living alone in five different age groups in the United States between 1850 and 2000.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people living by their own in USA in five different age groups from 1850 to 2000. Overall, the noticeable increase could be seen in percentage of individuals aged 47-54 and 55-64, while other age groups had increased a little. Starting with the slightly increased age groups, the 17-26 […]

Band 5+

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of household spending on different categories (food, transport, leisure, and education) in four countries in 2015.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of money spent on five types of household spending (food, transport, leisure, and education) in the UK, France, Japan, and Brazil in 2015. Overall, three countries (Brazil, Japan, and France) spent most of their money on food, compared to the UK, where the leisure was the highest, whereas the […]

Band 7+

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of household spending on different categories (food, transport, leisure, and education) in four countries in 2015.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of money spent on five types of household spending (food, transport, leisure, and education) in UK, France, Japan, and Brazil in 2015. Overall, three countries (Brazil, Japan, and France) spent most of their money on food compared to UK in leisure, whereas the least percentage of expenditure was on […]

Band 6+

The bar graphs shows the shares of expenditure in five categories

The bar chart depicts expenditures for five huge categories in four countries: the USA, Canada, the UK and Japan in 2009. Overall, generally all four countries had the highest percentage shares in first three categories ( food, housing and transportation), while those of health care and clothing were the lowest throughout the period. Starting with […]

Band 6+

the chart below shows the most visited museums in pakistan in 2024. summarise all the information in the chart below

The bar graph compares the most visited museums in Pakistan in 2024. Overall, the number of the visitors was highest in August while, June recorded the lowest number of visitors, in contrast July and September had the same figure. In June, 300 people visited the Maritime Museum, similarly 300 visitors visited the Maritime Museum in […]

Band 5+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium