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Band 6+: The chart below gives information about the average annual pay of doctors and other workers in seven different countries in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart comparing average annual pay in 2004 for doctors and other workers across seven countries as follows: France shows doctors at 80 and others at 25; Italy indicates doctors at 60 and others at 20; Czech Republic lists doctors at 40 and others at 15; Germany records doctors at 61 and others at 20; Finland shows doctors at 55 and others at 25; Switzerland denotes doctors at 65 and others at 40; The US displays doctors at 120 and others at 43.

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The chart illustrates the amount of average annual pay for doctors and othwe workers in seven countries in 2004

Overall, it is clear that doctors took more anual pay than other workers in all countries. it is worth noting that the US led both catagories while the lowest annual pay recorded at Czech Republic.

looking at the pay for doctors, the US had by far the largest annual pay, 120 while the lowest figure recoreded at 40 in Czech Respublic. France ranked the second, with 80. Italy and Germany were relatively similar, at 60 and 61 respectively. Switzerland made up 65 while Finland stood at 55.

Moving on to the anual pay for other woorkers, the US dominated at 43 whereas Czech Respublic had the lowest figure at 15. Italy Germany and Finland had the same figure at 20. Meanwhile, France and Switzerland accounted for 25 and 40 respectively.

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annual: 3

doctors: 3

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lowest: 3

czech: 3

figure: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making comparisons. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'othwe', 'anual', 'catagories', 'recoreded', 'Respublic', 'woorkers') that detract from clarity. Additionally, some data points are slightly misstated (e.g., Italy, Germany, and Finland are not all exactly 20 for other workers; Finland is 25). To improve, proofread carefully for spelling and ensure data accuracy. The overview could be more concise, and comparisons could be more explicit, such as highlighting the gap between doctors and other workers in each country. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs. However, there are some lapses in coherence due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'othwe workers' and 'catagories'. The use of cohesive devices is basic, and the flow could be improved by using more varied linking words and ensuring smoother transitions between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some appropriate terms like 'illustrates', 'led', and 'dominated'. However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'othwe', 'anual', 'catagories', 'recoreded', 'Respublic') and some repetitive phrasing (e.g., 'the lowest figure'). To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and ensure correct spelling to demonstrate more sophisticated lexical control.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms ('took more anual pay'), missing articles, and punctuation issues (e.g., missing capital letters after periods). Sentence structures are mostly simple, with limited use of complex constructions. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence types, ensuring subject-verb agreement, and proofreading for basic errors in tense and punctuation.

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