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Band 5+: The chart below gives information about the average annual pay of doctors and other workers in seven different countries in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart comparing average annual pay in 2004 for doctors and other workers across seven countries as follows: France shows doctors at 80 and others at 25; Italy indicates doctors at 60 and others at 20; Czech Republic lists doctors at 40 and others at 15; Germany records doctors at 61 and others at 20; Finland shows doctors at 55 and others at 25; Switzerland denotes doctors at 65 and others at 40; The US displays doctors at 120 and others at 43.

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The chart gives detailed information about the annual pay of doctors and other workers in seven varying countries in 2004.

Overall, it is clear that the US and France the highest figures in given period. Meanwhile, Czech Republic the lowest rate in 2014.

Looking at the details, the US was dominant with 120, following by France with 80, Meanwhile Italy was almost equal to Germany with 60. Finland and Switzerland were stood at 55 and 65. there are make up difference between 10. Czech Republic was lowest figure with 40.

As for others the US again highest rate with 43 following by Switzerland with 40. France and Italy stood at 25 and 20 difference between make up 5. Germany and Finland equal to each other with 20. Czech Republic again the lowest rate with 15 in chart.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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france: 3

czech: 3

republic: 3

lowest: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the data for doctors and other workers across the seven countries. It includes an overall statement and some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions: the overall statement incorrectly mentions 'France the highest figures' and 'Czech Republic the lowest rate in 2014' (the year is 2004). Some data points are misstated (e.g., Italy and Germany are not equal; Finland and Switzerland differences are not clearly explained). The report also lacks a clear structure and contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, correct the year, and organize the information more logically with clear comparisons. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to structure the information with an overview and detailed paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear phrasing and inconsistent use of linking words. The overview mentions 'the highest figures' but does not clearly state the overall trend or key comparison. The detailed paragraphs mix comparisons without a logical sequence, and some sentences are incomplete or confusing. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph, ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific comparison (e.g., doctors' pay in one paragraph, other workers' pay in another), and use cohesive devices like 'in contrast', 'similarly', or 'while' more effectively to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with limited range and some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'varying countries', 'make up difference'). There is an attempt to use synonyms like 'dominant' and 'lowest', but the language lacks sophistication and precision. To improve, expand your vocabulary with more precise terms for describing data (e.g., 'substantially higher', 'marginally lower', 'comparable figures'), and avoid informal or awkward phrases. Practice using a wider range of adjectives and adverbs to describe trends and comparisons. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including missing verbs (e.g., 'the US and France the highest figures'), incorrect tense ('were stood'), and punctuation issues (e.g., missing periods, incorrect capitalization). Sentence structures are often simple or incomplete, and there is limited use of complex sentences. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct verb forms, and proper punctuation. Practice constructing a mix of simple and complex sentences, such as using relative clauses or conditional structures, to demonstrate greater grammatical control.

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