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Band 4+: The chart below gives information on the numbers of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012

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The image contains a bar chart titled 'Skilled migrants to Australia, 2009-2012' with 4 occupation categories: Accountant, Cook, Software engineer, and Computer programmer. Each category has 4 bars representing different years with the following data: Accountant - 2009: 28 thousand workers, 2010: 22, 2011: 17, 2012: 18; Cook - 2009: 21, 2010: 17, 2011: 15, 2012: 16; Software engineer - 2009: 20, 2010: 19, 2011: 20, 2012: 19; Computer programmer - 2009: 17, 2010: 4, 2011: 2, 2012: 2. The y-axis is labeled 'In thousand workers' ranging from 0 to 30 in increments of 5.

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The chart illustrates that the number of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012

Overall, it is clearly seen that, the chart shows the highest percentage of Accountant 28 thousand workers in 2010. while the lowest percentage of computer programmer 2 thousand workers in 2009. In Australia.

According to the data, the number of Accountants increased by 8 thousand between 2009 and 2010. However, in 2011 to 2012, the Accountant decreased by 1 thousand. Moreover, the number of Cooks decreased by 2 thousand between 2009 and 2010. In 2011 to 2012, Cook also discreased 2 thousand.

According to the chart, the number of Software engineer increased by 1 thousand between 2009 and 2010, However, Softwere engineer discreased by 4 thousand between 2011 and 2012. Moreover, Computer programer are increased by 2 thousand between 2009 and 2010. However, Computer programer are incerased by 2 thousand between 2011 and 2012.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but suffers from significant inaccuracies in data interpretation and logical consistency. For example, the overview incorrectly identifies the highest and lowest values, and the body paragraphs contain contradictory statements (e.g., stating a number increased and then stating it decreased within the same context). Additionally, there is a frequent misuse of the term 'percentage' when the data is provided in absolute numbers (thousands). To improve, focus on accurately describing trends (increases vs. decreases) and ensuring that the data cited matches the visual information provided. Work on sentence structure to avoid fragmented thoughts and ensure mathematical accuracy when describing changes between years.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat repetitive, and the progression of ideas is hindered by several punctuation errors. There are instances of sentence fragments (e.g., 'In Australia.') and incorrect use of full stops where commas should be used to connect related ideas. To improve, focus on using cohesive devices (like 'In contrast', 'Similarly', or 'Regarding') to link sentences more naturally, and ensure that every sentence is a complete thought. Avoid starting every sentence with 'According to the...' or 'Moreover' to create a more varied flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and repetitive. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'Softwere', 'discreased', 'programer', 'incerased') that detract from the professionalism of the report. Additionally, there is a significant misuse of the word 'percentage'; the chart provides absolute numbers (thousands of workers), not percentages. To improve, work on expanding your range of synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease' (e.g., 'rose', 'declined', 'dipped', 'surged') and ensure you are using the correct mathematical terms based on the data provided.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'Computer programer are increased') and tense consistency. The use of articles (e.g., 'the Accountant') is often incorrect when referring to a group of people. To improve, practice using complex sentence structures such as relative clauses (e.g., 'The number of accountants, which stood at 28 thousand in 2009, then fell...') and ensure that your verb tenses remain consistent with the time period being described (the past tense should be used for 2009-2012).

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