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Band 4+: The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The image shows a bar graph of participation by 5 to 14-year-olds in selected leisure activities in Australia, divided by gender. Skateboarding/rollerblading has roughly 23% boys and 10% girls, bike riding 70% boys and 55% girls, watching TV/videos 80% boys and slightly below 80% girls, electronic/computer games close to 80% boys and 60% girls, and art and craft 30% boys and over 55% girls.

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The bar chart gives information about participation of children by 5 to 14-year-old selected in leisure activities in Australia. Overall, the highest figure shows watching TV or videos. While skateboarding/rolle-blading with art and craft are the most small figure. Moreover, the boys have a large figures on all activities than girls.

Focusing on leisure activities on boys, they have same 100 percent with girls on watching TV/videos, also activities like, bike riding and electronic computer games are highest, with respective figure of 70 and 80 percent. Skateboarding/rolle-blanding with art and craft also have the same 40 percent, showing the smaller activity figures of boys statistic.

The skateboard activity of girls has 30 percent, showing the smaller figure on girls statistic. The bike riding activity has 60 percent, followed the same figure by electronic computer games with 60 percent. Watching TV or videos have respective figure of 100 percent, while art and craft activity has around 55 percent.

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percent: 8

figure: 6

activities: 4

activity: 4

watching: 3

craft: 3

girls: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing genders, but it contains several inaccuracies and unclear statements. For example, it incorrectly states that boys and girls have the same 100% for watching TV/videos, and misreports figures for skateboarding and art and craft. The structure is somewhat disorganized, and some phrases are unclear (e.g., 'children by 5 to 14-year-old selected'). To improve, ensure data accuracy, use clearer language, and organize the report logically with an overview followed by detailed comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical progression. Ideas are presented in a confusing manner, and paragraphing is not effectively managed. The use of cohesive devices is limited and often inaccurate, making the message difficult to follow. To improve, structure the report with clear paragraphs: one for an overview and then separate paragraphs for boys and girls, using appropriate linking words to compare data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with errors such as 'small figure' and 'large figures'. There is an overuse of basic terms like 'figure' and 'activity'. To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary (e.g., 'participation rates', 'percentage', 'popular', 'least common') and avoid informal phrasing. Also, correct spelling errors like 'rolle-blading'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. Punctuation is often missing or misused. To improve, focus on basic sentence construction, use a variety of sentence structures (simple, compound, complex), and proofread for errors. Practice writing clear, grammatically correct sentences.

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