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Band 6+: The chart below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by Canada,UK,USA and Germany in 2007 in tonnes.

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The image presents a bar chart indicating 2007 import figures of tea and coffee in tonnes for Canada, UK, USA, and Germany; Canada imported 6000 tonnes of coffee and 2000 tonnes of tea, the UK imported 2000 tonnes of coffee and 11,000 tonnes of tea, the USA imported 4000 tonnes of coffee and 1000 tonnes of tea, and Germany imported 3000 tonnes of coffee and 5000 tonnes of tea.

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The bar chart compares four countries-namely Canada, The UK, The USA, and Germany, in terms of the amount of tea and coffee imported in 2007. The units are given in tonnes.

Overall, the amount of tea and coffee varyed degrees of difference in four countries. Canada imported the highest amount of coffee, whereas the UK allocated the largest amount of tea. In contrast, the UK imported the lowest amount of coffee and Canada showed similar figures with the UK. It is also worth noting that the USA and Germany imported more tea in tonnes than coffee.

Focusing on amount of coffee, Canada recorded highest figure with 8000 tonnes. Then the USA allocated 7000. Germany imported approximately 5000 tonnes. The UK accounted the lowest amount of coffee importing.

As for the amount of tea, the UK showed the largest amount, at 13000 tonnes. The USA imported of tea respectively at 9000 tonnes. Then Germany recorded 6000 tonnes. Canada accounted the lowest amount of tea with 4000 tonnes.

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germany: 4

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall comparison, but it contains several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Canada's coffee at 8000 instead of 6000, UK's tea at 13000 instead of 11000, etc.) and some unclear phrasing. To improve, ensure all figures are accurately reported and avoid vague statements like 'similar figures' without specifying values. Also, use more precise language to describe trends and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'Canada showed similar figures with the UK' is vague). The paragraphing is logical, but the cohesion within sentences could be improved by using more precise linking words and clearer comparisons. To enhance coherence, ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that the progression of ideas is smooth.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'allocated', 'recorded', 'accounted for'). However, there are inaccuracies and awkward collocations (e.g., 'varyed degrees of difference', 'imported of tea respectively'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and more precise terms (e.g., 'imported the highest quantity', 'followed by') would improve the report. To achieve a higher score, use a wider variety of accurate and natural expressions. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity (e.g., 'varyed' should be 'varied', 'accounted the lowest' should be 'accounted for the lowest', and missing commas). The range of structures is limited, and there are instances of incorrect verb forms and prepositions. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of prepositions, and ensuring each sentence is grammatically complete. More varied sentence structures would also enhance the score.

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