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Band 4+: the chart below shows the average cost of monthly contact for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from january to september 2002

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The image presents a line graph detailing average monthly contract costs (in Euros) for mobile services Domo, Lex, Slim TX, and Alpha from January to September 2002. Domo's costs are a consistent 20 Euros from January to June, rising to 25 Euros in July, 28 Euros in August, and 27 Euros in September. Lex starts at approximately 12 Euros in January and fluctuates around 13 to 16 Euros till September. Slim TX costs begin at about 15 Euros in January, peak at around 24 Euros in June, then sharply drop to near 0 Euros by August, ending at about 5 Euros in September. Alpha starts at roughly 1 Euro in January, gradually increases to about 10 Euros by September.

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The chart below is a clear description of the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile in a European country from January to September 2002.

First of all,the graphic shows that contract Alpha was the cheapest(5 Euros) in January while in august increased to 14 Euros and in Septemner become the most expensive (25 Euros). Lex begans with 13 Euros in January and have a small increase to 19 euros in September.Domo starts with 15 Euros in January,follow with 20 Euros in June and in September with 23 Euros.

In constast,the chart highligh the only contract which has not increased:in January start with 8 Euros, in June increased to 14 Euros and then in September come back to 8 Euros.It remained to the same level.

To sum up,with this graph we can see the different between four different mountly contract and how increased or not.In my opinion,the most convenient contract is Lex.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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euros: 7

contract: 5

january: 4

different: 3

september: 3

increased: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the trends in the line graph, but it contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The description of each mobile contract's cost fluctuations is not entirely correct, and there are instances of incorrect data values. The report also includes an opinion, which is not appropriate for Task 1. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, avoid personal opinions, and ensure a clear and organized structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The information is not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the trends and comparisons between the mobile contracts. The introduction is a restatement of the prompt and doesn't provide an overview. The body paragraphs are disjointed and lack clear topic sentences. The conclusion introduces a personal opinion ('the most convenient contract is Lex') which is not appropriate for this type of task. To improve, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each discuss a specific aspect or group of contracts, and a concluding summary without personal opinions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of more precise language to describe the trends and changes in the graph. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'increased,' try using words like 'rose,' 'grew,' 'peaked,' or 'fluctuated.' To improve, expand your vocabulary related to describing trends and data, and practice using synonyms to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. For example, 'Lex begans with 13 Euros' should be 'Lex began with 13 Euros.' To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules, practicing sentence construction, and proofreading carefully for errors.

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