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The image presents a line graph detailing average monthly contract costs (in Euros) for mobile services Domo, Lex, Slim TX, and Alpha from January to September 2002. Domo's costs are a consistent 20 Euros from January to June, rising to 25 Euros in July, 28 Euros in August, and 27 Euros in September. Lex starts at approximately 12 Euros in January and fluctuates around 13 to 16 Euros till September. Slim TX costs begin at about 15 Euros in January, peak at around 24 Euros in June, then sharply drop to near 0 Euros by August, ending at about 5 Euros in September. Alpha starts at roughly 1 Euro in January, gradually increases to about 10 Euros by September.

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The line graph displays how much was the average cost of monthly payment in four different mobile in a European country over a nine-month period from January to September in 2002 measured in euro.

Overall, it is clear that while Domo most of the period maintained the top position, Sim TX was the leader in the end of the period. Although, generally prices in all companies increased, except that of Alpha.

In January 2002, Domo provided the highest prices of monthly contract 15 euros, in May that of was 20 euros. Having reached a peak at 25 euros per month, prices in the Domo decreased. Prices in Sim TX experienced a fluctuation between 5 and 7 euros. Despite a fluctuation, cost started to increase and in September was in the highest position at 25 euros.

If we look at the details, cost changes in Lex and Alpha followed to the almost the same pattern until a May. While in May cost in the Lex was 13 euros that of in the Alpha was 9 euros. However, price in the Lex went up and was 17 euros , whereas it in the Alpha decreased and by the end of the period was 9 euros.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies in data reporting and contradictions that hinder clarity. For instance, the overview states that Alpha's prices generally increased, but the body paragraph claims they decreased. Additionally, there are several instances where the data provided in the report does not align with the trends described (e.g., describing Slim TX as the leader at the end of the period when the data suggests otherwise). To improve, ensure that the trends identified in the overview are consistently supported by the specific data in the body paragraphs, and double-check that the numerical values assigned to each category are accurate and clearly linked to the correct mobile provider.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report struggles with logical flow and the use of cohesive devices. Some transitions, such as 'Although' at the start of a sentence, are used incorrectly as conjunctions rather than transitions. The organization of ideas is somewhat disjointed, making it difficult for the reader to follow the comparison between the different mobile providers. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and use linking words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly', 'Furthermore') to connect ideas smoothly rather than starting sentences with fragments.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often repetitive. There are several instances of awkward phrasing, such as 'how much was the average cost of monthly payment' and 'provided the highest prices of monthly contract'. Additionally, there are spelling inconsistencies (e.g., 'Sim TX' vs 'Slim TX'). To improve, aim to use a wider range of synonyms for 'cost' (e.g., expenditure, price, amount) and 'increase/decrease' (e.g., rose, climbed, plummeted, declined). Work on using more precise collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede communication. There are issues with sentence structure (e.g., 'that of was 20 euros'), word order, and article usage. The report also lacks a variety of complex sentence structures, relying heavily on simple or incorrectly constructed sentences. To improve, focus on mastering subject-verb agreement, the correct use of relative clauses (e.g., 'the cost of which was...'), and ensuring that comparative structures are used accurately (e.g., 'higher than' instead of 'in the highest position').

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