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Band 5+: The chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar chart detailing the average hours worked per day by married men and women aged 24-44 and 45-64. For husbands aged 24-44: 7 hours (paid work), 2 hours (unpaid work at home), total 9 hours; wives aged 24-44: 4 hours (paid work), 5 hours (unpaid work at home), total 9 hours. For husbands aged 45-64: 7 hours (paid work), 1 hour (unpaid work at home), total 8 hours; wives aged 45-64: 3 hours (paid work), 5 hours (unpaid work at home), total 8 hours.

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The presented bar chart illustrates the mean employment hours and domestic works of married ladies and gentlemen by daily basis in two age groups which age between 24 to 44 and 45 to 64.

Overall, it is clear that married women’s are spending peak of total working hours in both age groups. Further there is a similar pattern in both age group’s of men and women.

As per the chart, Despite the age groups, general employment period of husbands are approximately equal to 7 hours. Even though younger husbands are involving more time in domestic works, when they are getting older, they tend to release those works since it shows the decrease up to 2 hours.

In addition, married ladies are commonly works more than 10 hours in both salary payable works and house works. In 24 to 44, they are spending similar hours in two works. Whereas, older ladies are engaging as employees in large amount of period which just passing 6 hours.

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The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the chart and making relevant comparisons. However, some key details could be more precisely conveyed for a higher score.

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