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Band 7+: The chart below shows the average price per kilo of clothing imported into the European Union from seven major countries of origin in 1997 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a bar chart detailing average clothing prices per kilo imported into the EU from specific countries in 1993 and 2003. Prices in pounds (£) are listed for each country: Argentina 1993 at 28, Argentina 2003 at 25; Brazil 1993 at 25, Brazil 2003 at 20; Japan 1993 at 15, Japan 2003 at 12; China 1993 at 10, China 2003 at 15; India 1993 at 8, India 2003 at 6; Bangladesh 1993 at 6, Bangladesh 2003 at 3.

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The bar chart illustrates the average price of clothes per kilogram which was imported into the European Union from seven different, major countries from 1997 to 2003, with the units measured in pounds.

Overall, it can be seen that while the figures China, India, and Bangladesh experienced upward trends, the price of clothing in Argentina and Japan decreased, with Brazil remaining unchanged. Notably, although Argentina decreased, it remained the highest figures.

As for increased prices in countries, the price of clothing in China was 10 pounds at first, followed by a significant rise to around 17 pounds in 2003. While the figure for India which started at around 7 pounds increased moderately to 12 pounds by the end, that for Bangladesh accounted for the least, at 3 pounds in 1993, which increased as twice as it was initially, making up 6 pounds at the end.

Looking at remaining countries, Argentina had the highest point, at roughly 28 pounds, which decreased to 26 pounds in 2003. The same pattern was observed in Japan, which began at 15 pounds and decreased to 13 pounds by 2003. Having made up approximately 23 pounds in 1993, the figure for Brazil had remained the same by 2003.

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pounds: 11

which: 5

decreased: 4

price: 3

countries: 3

argentina: 3

increased: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but it contains several inaccuracies and inconsistencies. The time period is incorrectly stated as 1997 to 2003 instead of 1993 and 2003. The trends for China, India, and Bangladesh are described as upward, but the data shows decreases for India and Bangladesh. Additionally, Brazil is said to have remained unchanged, which is not supported by the data (it decreased from 25 to 20). Some specific figures are also inaccurate (e.g., China's final price, India's starting price, Argentina's final price, Japan's final price, and Bangladesh's starting price). To improve, ensure that the time period is correctly stated, accurately describe the trends based on the data, and provide correct figures. Focus on presenting the information clearly and accurately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall structure, including an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for specific data. The use of cohesive devices such as 'while', 'notably', and 'as for' helps the reader follow the progression. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the phrase 'the figures China, India, and Bangladesh' which is slightly awkward and could be rephrased for smoother flow. Additionally, the final sentence about Brazil could be more clearly linked to the preceding information. Overall, the message is easy to follow, but there is room for more sophisticated paragraphing and linking.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, including terms like 'illustrates', 'experienced upward trends', 'significant rise', and 'accounted for the least'. There is some flexibility in word choice, but there are a few inaccuracies and less natural expressions, such as 'the figures China, India, and Bangladesh' (missing 'for') and 'increased as twice as it was initially' (should be 'increased to twice its initial value'). The phrasing 'Having made up approximately 23 pounds' is slightly awkward. To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and natural collocations, and ensure that all expressions are idiomatic.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences with subordinate clauses, which demonstrates good grammatical range. There are minor errors and awkward phrasings, such as 'the figures China, India, and Bangladesh' (missing preposition), 'increased as twice as it was initially' (incorrect comparative structure), and 'Having made up approximately 23 pounds' (unclear subject). Punctuation is generally correct, but these small issues prevent the grammar from being fully accurate. To improve, focus on using precise grammatical structures and proofreading to eliminate minor errors.

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