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Band 4+: The chart below shows the average time commuters spent travelling to work each day in four Australian cities between 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image depicts the average time commuters spent traveling to work in four Australian cities from 2002 to 2010; Sydney: 2002 - 30 mins, 2004 - 33 mins, 2006 - 35 mins, 2008 - 36 mins, 2010 - 38 mins; Perth: 2002 - 18 mins, 2004 - 17 mins, 2006 - 19 mins, 2008 - 20 mins, 2010 - 21 mins; Brisbane: 2002 - 22 mins, 2004 - 24 mins, 2006 - 26 mins, 2008 - 28 mins, 2010 - 30 mins; Adelaide: 2002 - 24 mins, 2004 - 26 mins, 2006 - 27 mins, 2008 - 28 mins, 2010 - 30 mins.

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The graph above illustrates average minutes commuters spent for travelling to work in Sydney, Perth, Brisbane, and Adelaide from 2002 to 2010 in every 2 years. The highest average time minutes was in 2006 Sydney, while the lowest were similar in 2002 and 2010 Adelaide.

Sydney’s trend was initially increasing from 2002 to 2008, before declining in 2010, which has the similar trend as Brisbane. Perth on the other hand, remaining stable from 2002 to 2008, and rised in 2010. Adelaide was consistently increasing from 2002 to 2006, then suddenly declining in 2008 and 2010.

Overall, Sydney has the highest average time minutes in every year comparing in other city. In conclusian, all categories experienced changes over time and several cities had showed identical patterns, which are Sydney and Brisbane.

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sydney: 4

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brisbane: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some trends but contains inaccuracies. For example, Sydney's trend did not decline in 2010, and Adelaide's trend did not suddenly decline in 2008 and 2010. The report also contains some issues with grammar and word choice. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and focus on clear, precise language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping cities with similar trends together in paragraphs to enhance coherence. The transitions between sentences and paragraphs need improvement to guide the reader more smoothly through the information. For example, instead of stating 'Sydney's trend was initially increasing...', try 'Sydney experienced an initial increase...'. Also, avoid abrupt shifts in focus; ensure each sentence logically follows the previous one. The conclusion could be more insightful, summarizing the overall trends and providing a clearer sense of the 'big picture' rather than just restating that changes occurred.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'increasing' and 'declining,' incorporate synonyms like 'rising,' 'growing,' 'falling,' or 'decreasing' to add nuance and sophistication. Also, consider using more specific language to describe the trends, such as 'a gradual increase' or 'a sharp decline,' where appropriate. While the vocabulary is understandable, expanding the range would elevate the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'The highest average time minutes was in 2006 Sydney' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'The highest average travel time was recorded in Sydney in 2006.' Similarly, 'Perth on the other hand, remaining stable...' is a fragment and needs to be a complete sentence. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper sentence structure. Proofreading carefully for these errors will significantly improve the report's grammatical accuracy.

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