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Band 7+: The chart below shows the changes in ownership of electrical appliances. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Image for topic: The chart below shows the changes in ownership of electrical appliances. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The image shows a line graph titled "Percentage of households with electrical appliances (1920–2019)", featuring a y-axis labeled "Percentage of households" marked from 0 to 100 in increments of 10, and an x-axis labeled "Year" with points for 1920, 1940, 1960, 1980, 2000, and 2019. A legend indicates three appliances: Washing machine (solid line with filled circles), Refrigerator (solid line with open circles), and Vacuum cleaner (dashed line with open circles). Data values are: Washing machine: 1920 at 40%, 1940 at 60%, 1960 at 70%, 1980 at 65%, 2000 at 70%, and 2019 at approximately 75%; Vacuum cleaner: 1920 at 30%, 1940 at 50%, 1960 at 70%, 1980 at 90%, 2000 at 100%, and 2019 at 100%; Refrigerator: 1920 at approximately 2%, 1940 at approximately 55%, 1960 at 90%, and 1980 at 100%.
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The provided line graphs illustrate the proportion of households with electrical appliances and the duration of housework per week from 1920 to 2019.

Overall, percentages of households with refrigerators and vacuum cleaners showed an upward trend, whereas the number of hours of housework per week experienced a steady decrease throughout the period.

In 1920, the percentage of households with washing machines, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners stood at 40%, 30%, 0% respectively, before increasing to 60%, 50% and 55% in that order in 1940. Two decades later, the share of refigerators increased significantly to 90%, whereas the percentage of washing machines and vacuum cleaners shared the same proportion, making up 70% of the total. The proportion of households with refrigerators reached its peak in 1980, accounting for 100%, while the share of vacuum cleaners grew to 90%, before growing to 100%, and sharing the same percentage until the end of the period. In contrast, the percentage of houses with washing machine decreased to 65% in the year 1980. Moreover, this percentage rose steadily, making up approximately 75% in 2019.

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Overall Band Score

7
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
percentage: 5
households: 4
vacuum: 4
cleaners: 4
proportion: 3
refrigerators: 3
washing: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

7
The report covers the main features of the chart, describing trends for each appliance and making some comparisons. However, it includes a significant inaccuracy: it mentions 'the duration of housework per week' and 'the number of hours of housework per week,' which are not part of the given visual description. This introduces irrelevant information that detracts from task achievement. Additionally, there are minor data inaccuracies (e.g., refrigerator at 0% in 1920, vacuum cleaner at 50% in 1940, and washing machine at 60% in 1940) and a spelling error ('refigerators'). To improve, focus solely on the data presented, ensure accuracy of figures, and avoid introducing unrelated elements.

Coherence & Cohesion

7
The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the overview mentions 'duration of housework per week,' which is not part of the given data, causing a slight coherence issue. The progression of data is generally clear, but some transitions could be smoother. To improve, ensure the overview accurately reflects the visual information and use a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

7
The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with some good collocations like 'upward trend,' 'steady decrease,' and 'reached its peak.' However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'percentage' used frequently) and a few imprecise terms (e.g., 'houses' instead of 'households'). To enhance lexical resource, incorporate synonyms and more precise vocabulary, such as 'proportion,' 'figure,' 'ownership,' and 'households.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7
The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of tenses. There are minor errors, such as a misspelling ('refigerators') and a slight awkwardness in phrasing ('before growing to 100%, and sharing the same percentage'). To achieve a higher score, proofread for spelling and refine sentence structures for clarity and conciseness.

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