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Band 6+: The chart below shows the information about the favourite subjects of 60 students from two schools, school A and school B. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a grouped bar chart comparing "School A" and "School B" across five subjects along the horizontal axis: "Social Science", "Science", "Language", "Craft/Drawing", and "Sport". The vertical axis ranges from 0 to 40 in increments of 5. For Social Science, School A is at 6 and School B is at 10. For Science, School A is at 9 and School B is at 2. For Language, School A is at 5 and School B is at 18. For Craft/Drawing, School A is at 4 and School B is at 25. For Sport, School A is at 36 and School B is at 5.

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The chart indicates the information about the favourite subjects of sixty students from two different schools, school A and school B.

Overall, larger number of students from school A interested in Sport subjects while students from school B interested mostly in Language and Drawing subjects.

The number of students from school A who were interested in Social Science was about 5 while it made up 10 students from school B. Roughly 9 students were liked to participate in Science subjects from school A. This trend constituted only around 2 children for school B. The interests for Languages was higher with around 18 students in school B while this trend was lower in school A with 5 students.

Looking at the other subjects, Craft/Drawing subject attracted 25 individuals from school B, and about 4 students from school A. The number of students who were interested in Sport was the peak of 35 in school A. The same figure accounted for 5 students from school B.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

school: 14

students: 10

subjects: 4

interested: 4

about: 3

number: 3

while: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by presenting an overview and key comparisons between the two schools across the five subjects. The overall trend is clearly stated, and the main data points are included. However, there are a few minor inaccuracies (e.g., Social Science for School A is given as 'about 5' instead of 6, and Sport for School A as '35' instead of 36) and some awkward phrasing (e.g., 'students were liked to participate', 'this trend constituted'). To improve, ensure precise data reporting and use more natural academic language. Additionally, consider structuring the body paragraphs more clearly by grouping subjects or comparing them systematically.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear overall statement and a division into two main paragraphs. However, the flow could be improved by using more cohesive devices to link ideas and data points. For example, using 'In contrast' or 'Similarly' would help the reader follow the comparisons more smoothly. The paragraphing is adequate but could be more effective if the second paragraph focused on one school and the third on the other, or if the data were grouped by similar trends.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'interested in', 'attracted', 'accounted for'). However, there are some awkward and inaccurate word choices, such as 'larger number of students' (should be 'a larger number'), 'interested in Sport subjects' (should be 'interested in Sport'), and 'were liked to participate' (should be 'liked to participate' or 'were interested in'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and more precise and varied terms could be used to describe trends and comparisons (e.g., 'significantly higher', 'considerably lower', 'peaked at'). Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'larger number of students' is missing an article, 'were liked to participate' is incorrect, and 'The interests for Languages was higher' has subject-verb agreement issues. Punctuation is mostly correct, but the overall accuracy is inconsistent. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and ensuring that verb forms are used correctly.

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