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Band 5+: The chart below shows the levels of air pollution in three major cities (City A, City B, and City C) from 2010 to 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows air pollution levels for 2010-2020 in three cities: City A, 2010 at 78 µg/m³, 2012 at 77 µg/m³, 2014 at 76 µg/m³, 2016 at 74 µg/m³, 2018 at 71 µg/m³, 2020 at 68 µg/m³; City B, 2010 at 63 µg/m³, 2012 at 64 µg/m³, 2014 at 66 µg/m³, 2016 at 70 µg/m³, 2018 at 67 µg/m³, 2020 at 65 µg/m³; City C, 2010 at 41 µg/m³, 2012 at 43 µg/m³, 2014 at 46 µg/m³, 2016 at 48 µg/m³, 2018 at 47 µg/m³, 2020 at 45 µg/m³.

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The chart provided the air pollution levels in three cities, city A, B and C from 2010 to 2020.

In summary, three cities had decrease the amount of air pollution through years with different of levels. First, city A had the most air pollution level in overall with 80 per meter but it did a great job when in 2020 it was only have 65 per meter. We all can see the hard-working of people in the town. Next, city B had a medium of air pollution level, approximately 65 per meter. Unfortunately, almost 2018 the air pollution level boosted a lots into 75 per meter but then the residents have been trying to decrease the amount of air pollution and in 2020 it ended up with 70 per meter. Finally, city C had the clearest town when the air pollution is surrouding 45 per meter and they kept it until 2020.

This chart also tell us about the pollution problems in all over the world had been a massive issue through years and have not end yet. So raise people and yourself awareness is the most important thing must do to save the Earth. Afterwards, we should going to break out to move on the next step.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

pollution: 8

meter: 6

level: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but includes some inaccuracies and irrelevant information. The summary identifies the cities and the time frame, but there are errors in reporting the data values. The report also includes some personal opinions and general statements about pollution, which are not required in Task 1. To improve, focus on accurately describing the main trends and specific data points from the chart, and avoid adding personal opinions or general knowledge.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The ideas are not well-organized, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are weak. The report also includes irrelevant information and personal opinions, which detract from the overall coherence. For example, the final paragraph introduces a general discussion about global pollution and personal actions, which is not directly related to the data presented in the chart. To improve coherence and cohesion, focus on organizing the information in a clear and logical manner, using appropriate linking words and phrases, and avoiding irrelevant details and personal opinions.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary and some inaccuracies in word choice. The language used is not always precise or appropriate for describing the data. For example, the phrase "decrease the amount of air pollution through years with different of levels" is awkward and unclear. Similarly, the use of "hard-working of people in the town" is not the most natural way to express the idea of efforts to reduce pollution. To improve lexical resource, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends and data, and pay attention to using words and phrases accurately and appropriately. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and inaccuracies, which affect the clarity and accuracy of the writing. There are errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. For example, "three cities had decrease" should be "three cities had decreased" or "three cities decreased." Similarly, "city A had the most air pollution level in overall with 80 per meter" contains multiple errors. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on reviewing and practicing basic grammar rules, and pay attention to correcting errors in your writing.

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