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Band 4+: The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a line graph with three lines representing Iran, Indonesia, and Russia, depicting the number of people (in millions) moving from rural to urban areas from the year 2000 to 2025. Iran's trend starts at 20 million in 2000, consistently increases reaching 60 million by 2025. Indonesia starts with approximately 17 million in 2000, rising to nearly 30 million by 2025. Russia begins around 10 million in 2000 with a relatively steady incline, reaching close to 20 million by 2025. Each line has incremental rises with no decreases or plateaus, and the Y-axis is marked at intervals of 10 million from 0 to 100 million, while the X-axis has five-year increments from 2000 to 2025.

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The chart depicts the information about three countries in the people who migrated from rural areas to urban areas and thought about future years.

Overall, the three countries such as Iran, Indonesia and Russia, in which Irani people move higher rate of people in future from 2000 to 2025 rather than Indonesian people move fewer rates of people.

To be commenced with, in 2000, Irani people above 10 million and then moving rapidly from rural areas to urban areas and reaching above 90 million in 2025. On the other hand, in 2000, Indonesian people begin from 10 million and move slowly rather than Irani people and reach at 30 million. Furthermore, Russian people begin from below 10 million in 2000 and increasing in the number of people moving fastly as same as above Irani people but reach the number of people in 2025 is below 90 million.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The report attempts to summarize the main trends, but it contains inaccuracies and lacks detail. The language is also quite basic, with errors in grammar and vocabulary. To improve, focus on providing more accurate data and using a wider range of vocabulary to describe the trends. Also, ensure that your grammar is correct to improve clarity. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The introduction is weak, and the overview is not well-defined. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions, making it difficult to follow the comparisons between the countries. Paragraphing needs improvement to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the trends and data. The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary related to trends, comparisons, and predictions. For example, instead of 'move higher rate of people,' consider using 'experience a higher rate of migration.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structures are simple and repetitive. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence variety is crucial for a higher score. For example, 'Irani people move higher rate of people' should be revised to 'Iran experienced a higher rate of migration.'

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