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Band 7+: The chart below shows the number of immigrants to Germany by region in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image presents a bar chart titled 'The number of immigrants to Germany in 2000 and 2010', with the vertical axis representing millions. Immigrant numbers for 2000 were: Oceania 16 million, Europe 30 million, Africa 6 million, America 23 million, East Asia 15 million, and South Asia 5.5 million. For 2010, the numbers were: Oceania 23 million, Europe 25 million, Africa 7.5 million, America 13 million, East Asia 24 million, and South Asia 5 million.

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The graph displayed illustrates the amount of immigrants entering Germany, covering 6 different regions in 2000 and 2010.

In 2000, the amount of individuals migrating to the nation of Germany consisted of a diverse melting pot of different nationailties, Europe being the majoirity with 30 million immigrants alone, followed up by America in second place being home to around 23 million, then Oceania with 11 million, East Asia with 15 million, and lastly South Asia being the smallest contributor of 6 million.

Notably, 2010 was witness to considerable fluctuation in the amount of immigrants, with the prevoius largest home of immigrants of Europe staying on top inspite of a 5 million decrease from 30 to 25 in the last decade. Conversely, East Asia’s amount of immigrants increased the most from 2000, spiking from 15 to 24 million, while Oceania’s numbers increased to around 23 million from 16 million a decade earlier, whilst American immigrants plummeted form 23 to 13 million.

And finally, Africa and South Asia were relativly the same between the two time periods having only increased 1 million and decreased 1 million respectively.

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The report effectively addresses the task by identifying the main trends and making relevant comparisons between the two years. The overview is integrated into the body paragraphs, and the key features (increases, decreases, and stability) are clearly highlighted. To improve, ensure that all data points are consistent with the provided description (for example, the report mentions Oceania at 11 million in 2000, whereas the description states 16 million). Additionally, avoid using overly descriptive or emotive language like 'melting pot' in favor of more academic, objective terminology. Overall, the response is well-structured and covers the requirements of the task sufficiently.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is organized logically, moving from an overview to specific details for each year. However, the use of 'And finally' to start the last paragraph is somewhat informal for an academic report. To improve cohesion, try using more sophisticated transition signals such as 'Regarding...' or 'In terms of...' to introduce the final set of data. Additionally, ensure that the flow between sentences is smoother by avoiding overly long, run-on sentences in the second and third paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

You have used a good range of vocabulary to describe changes, such as 'spiking', 'plummeted', and 'considerable fluctuation'. However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'majoirity', 'nationailties', 'prevoius', 'relativly') that detract from the overall quality. Furthermore, be careful with word choice: 'amount' is typically used for uncountable nouns, whereas 'number' is more appropriate for countable nouns like 'immigrants'. Using 'number of immigrants' instead of 'amount of immigrants' would be more precise.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are issues with sentence structure that lead to run-on sentences, particularly in the second paragraph where multiple clauses are joined by commas without sufficient conjunctions or punctuation. To improve, practice using semicolons or breaking long descriptions into two distinct sentences to maintain clarity and grammatical control. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and the correct use of prepositions.

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