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Band 4+: The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a bar graph detailing the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation from 1918 to 2011. In 1918, owned: 23%, rented: 77%. In 1939, owned: 32%, rented: 68%. In 1953, owned: 39%, rented: 61%. In 1961, owned: 44%, rented: 56%. In 1971, owned: 50%, rented: 50%. In 1981, owned: 60%, rented: 40%. In 1991, owned: 67%, rented: 33%. In 2001, owned: 69%, rented: 31%. In 2011, owned: 64%, rented: 36%.

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The bargraph illlustrate that the figure of people who have their own house and someothers who have ranted house in England and Wales during the time of 1918 and 2011.

In this bargraph , there were an increasing period of owned accommdation and a decreasing period of rented accommodation. In the year of 1918, It carried the highest number of households in ranted accommodation and the lowest number of households in own accommodation which were around 80% and 20%. In this way those percentage were runnig. When it was 1971, there were no difference among those percentage.

But the most noticable part of this chart , in the year of 2011 where the trend was broken. In this year the number of owners was higher than the renters and that were around 65% nad 40%. It was the oposite rise and fall between previous years.

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The report addresses the task and provides a general overview of the data. However, it lacks specific details and accurate data referencing, which affects the clarity and precision of the summary. To improve, include more specific data points and ensure accuracy in reporting the percentages. Also, organize the information more logically, perhaps by grouping periods with similar trends together. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is limited use of appropriate vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons effectively. The report could benefit from a wider range of vocabulary related to housing and statistical data to enhance the description and analysis of the information. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles and prepositions. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the writing. The sentence structure is also simplistic and lacks complexity, which limits the overall effectiveness of the report. For example, 'The bargraph illlustrate that the figure of people who have their own house and someothers who have ranted house in England and Wales during the time of 1918 and 2011' contains multiple errors.

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