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Band 6+: The chart below shows the percentage of men and women who did various free-time activities in England.

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The image displays a horizontal bar graph showing percentages of men and women engaged in various activities: Watching TV - Women 80%, Men 78%; Spending time with family - Women 70%, Men 61%; Shopping - Women 65%, Men 40%; Doing sport/exercise - Women 20%, Men 45%; Reading - Women 50%, Men 30%; Using the Internet - Women 40%, Men 60%; Playing computer games - Women 12%, Men 35%.

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The chart demonstrated the participation rates of men and women in different leisure activities in England.

Overall , all attractive activities have equal percentages for both men and women. While shopping was popular with women , men mostly spent their leisure time using the internet. In addition , playing computer games was the least favored activity

and watching TV has the highest rate of participation over the board.

Regarding watching TV , spending time with family , doing exercise and reading, both men and women are interested in those activities. To be more clear , about 75% of men and women tend to watch TV and spend time with family. Just slightly below 75% is doing sport and reading with the participation of male is a little bit higher than females.

On the other hand , shopping and using the internet have a huge difference between the two genders. While 75% of women prefer shopping and just approximately 27% men share the same interest. In contrast to this tendency , nearly 75% of men spend their break time surfing the internet , this figure for women just accounts for 30% to 40%. Ultimately , playing computer games breaks all the trends , with nearly 20% of men compared to 13% of women.

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women: 8

participation: 3

activities: 3

shopping: 3

internet: 3

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The report covers the main features of the graph and provides a generally clear overview. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., percentages for shopping, internet use, and computer games are not quite right), and the overview could be more precise. To improve, ensure data accuracy by double-checking figures and focus on providing a more nuanced overview that captures the key differences and similarities without overgeneralizing.

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The report demonstrates an adequate structure with an overview, body paragraphs, and some attempt at logical flow. However, the coherence could be improved by using more precise transition words and phrases to connect ideas within and between paragraphs. The organization is generally clear, but some sentences feel disjointed, impacting the overall flow. For example, the connection between the overall statement and the subsequent details could be strengthened. Paragraphing is generally acceptable but could be refined for better thematic unity.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are instances where the word choice could be more precise and sophisticated. Some phrases are a bit generic (e.g., 'attractive activities,' 'huge difference'). Expanding the range of vocabulary related to describing data and trends would enhance the report. While the vocabulary is generally accurate, there's room for improvement in using more nuanced language to convey the information.

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The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. Subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect preposition usage, and awkward phrasing are present. While the overall meaning is usually clear, these errors detract from the report's professionalism and impact. A more careful review for grammatical accuracy and sentence construction is needed.

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